Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Not sure it it's a good card. Still having my Card Maker's block. Lol. Edited:This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 FIRE monster with 1500 or higher ATK. When this card is Summoned, increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters you control by 500 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed, decrease the ATK and DEF of all monsters you control by 500. By removing from play this card from your Graveyard, Special Summon 1 FIRE monster with 1500 or less ATK from your Deck. Thanks to LiAM for the edit suggestion. LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 It's a circle effect. Basically, you tribute it and use it all, then Special Summon a monster, and Tribute blah blah and you got another 800 ATK. Good in burn Decks - maybe too good tbh. Slightly overpowered for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 hmm thanks, any tips to balance it out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Take out the Special Summon effect at the end. And limit the ATK gain and loss for the turn it happens in. And not a chainable re-summon, it would be abused for OTK's (3 of these = +2400 ATK). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 hmm thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 No probz, just trying to help. It's up to you whether you take it on-board, just cause someone else said it's better that way, doesn't mean it is. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 hmm I guess. LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 After you remade it, it looks great. The pic looks good. And the OCG is fine. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 It appears someone liked the edit I recommended D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Yep you're right. Thanks, wahahaha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 i think that this is an awesome card. I love using burn decks and this woulld be a great card in it. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Aiku: It's a conspiracy! I tell you, a conspiracy!Phanax: *punches Aiku* I'm not asking you! Author's Note: I'll rant the edit version.OCG: No visual errors.Effect: A circle effect that'll burn and decrease your opponent away. A good effect to summon more easily FIRE monster too.Image and Name: I can understand the Forgotten part of the name (she's going to turn into ashes by the fire), but why maiden? She looks like more a dancer or something. 0_o'' Yeah, a dancer. Overall: 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Aiku: It's a conspiracy! I tell you' date=' a conspiracy![/color']Phanax: *punches Aiku* I'm not asking you! Author's Note: I'll rant the edit version.OCG: No visual errors.Effect: A circle effect that'll burn and decrease your opponent away. A good effect to summon more easily FIRE monster too.Image and Name: I can understand the Forgotten part of the name (she's going to turn into ashes by the fire), but why maiden? She looks like more a dancer or something. 0_o'' Yeah, a dancer. Overall: 8.7/10 i was bout to say the same thinganyways good job 8.9/10 where did you get the pic from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Name change to; Fire DancerEmber ChanterFlame DazzlerMistress of Flame -You get the idea. Do it if you want, like Phanax said, 'Forgotten maiden' is ok, but not really that fire related.And also kinda scary and not as Yugioh like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 It's a circle effect. Basically' date=' you tribute it and use it all, then Special Summon a monster, and Tribute blah blah and you got another 800 ATK. Good in burn Decks - maybe too good tbh. Slightly overpowered for me.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cor3lyf00tball1ing Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Looks better after re-do! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Looks better after re-do! :) Thanks. lol - Stealing the credit aren't I Tyler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 neat circle effect It doesn't look OPed, pic is very good, so I'll give it 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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