jayjack Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 [align=center]Effect:[/align]During the end of your opponent's End Phase, if this face-up Attack position monster exist on your side of the field, special summon as many "Primal Scream" monsters in your hand or graveyard as possible. If this monster does damage to your opponents Life Points, it's original ATK becomes 2500. If 3 "Primal Scream" monsters exist on your side of the field, you can sacrifice 2 to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Liam's suggestion:Effect:If this card is face-up during your opponent's End Phase, Special Summon as many "Primal Scream" monsters from your hand or Graveyard as possible. If this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponents Life Points, it's original ATK becomes 1500. If 3 "Primal Scream" monsters exist on your field, you can Tribute 2 to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 OCG: During each of your opponent's End Phase, if this card is face-up on the field, Special Summon as many "Primal Scream" monsters from your hand or Graveyard as possible. If this monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, this card's original ATK becomes 2500. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if there are 3 or more face-up "Primal Scream" monsters on your side of the field, you can Tribute 2 "Primal Scream" monsters, except this card. If you do, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. I think the effect is overpowered, since it sets itself up for 1000 damage each turn. Change it to Special Summoning the monsters when it is summoned, not each turn. 7/10 Join the Newb Defense League! You're pretty good! \/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 consider its 100 atk points and at the end of your opponents end phase it summons monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Aiku: OCG (Original Card Grammar) FIXING! During your opponent's End Phase, if you control this face-up Attack Position monster, Special Summon up to 2 "Primal Scream" your Graveyard or hand. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, its original ATK becomes 2500. If you control 3 "Primal Scream", you can Tribute 2 "Primal Scream" to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Effect: Good effect for a Zombie-type monster, but I suggest you to increase the ATK of this card and decrease its level.Image and Name: Fit well together. Overall: 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Good card, a few OCG mistakes sacrifice=Tribute.Nice effect and good pic.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 [align=center]Okay so... first things first. Image is ok, but Grim Reapers are out of fashion. OCG:If this card is face-up during your opponent's End Phase, Special Summon as many "Primal Scream" monsters from your hand or Graveyard as possible. If this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponents Life Points, it's original ATK becomes 2500. If 3 "Primal Scream" monsters exist on your field, you can Tribute 2 to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.:) Stuff:--Effect is ok. Unlikely to happen unless you run some Threatening Roars and some other similar cards.I actually like this card and might use it. The only problem is its low ATK, which makes it less likely to be ran.I can see this being used in lots of Decks.In fact I wouldn't be surprised if you copied the effect off a real card. :shock: It's quite impressive, just needs a better image. Possible changes to consider:Level 7ATK: 500ATK change with direct hit: 1500 instead of 2500. [spoiler=[font=Times New Roman]Possible Image[/font]] *I think the image suits as you can only see the monsters mouth, and so suits the "Primal Scream". Whether you take this help on board and decide to edit your card, it's up to you. ;)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Okay, i guess i should've mentioned this before. Primal Scream is a boss in a game called Rappelz. Thats his picture o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Then you should have put this card in Pop Culture. Are you going to consider the OCG fix and image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Okay, I took your suggestion O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Okay you just need to edit the OCG on my suggestion. Even if you don't like my OCG fix completely, you could see what people think of your card compared to mine. Let's see who wins, create a poll so people could vote if you want - just don't make it into a contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 after the OCG change effects are slightly OPed still, but enough to earn 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 after the OCG change effects are slightly OPed still' date=' but enough to earn 8/10[/quote'] Well I did suggest an effect change, is that till not enough, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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