Prodigy101 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I'm planning on entering this card in a contest but i need help with the OCG. And if you think it's OP'd or spot any errors that you can help me correct, it would be greatly appreciated. (I've updated both cards) As long as this card remains on the field, increase the DEF of all monsters you control by 300. You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control 1 Defense Position monster on the Field. Iron Shield Dragon + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.This card is changed to Defense Position when it is Summoned. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. If this card attacks while in Defense Position, apply the ATK of this card for damage calculation. This card cannot be destroyed by monster effects. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 monster in your Graveyard from Play whose ATK is lower than it's DEF to reduce the ATK of your opponent's monster by 1000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 First card is cool, just I would lower the DEF.And possibly remove the Tuner part, up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigy101 Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 First card is cool' date=' just I would lower the DEF.And possibly remove the Tuner part, up to you.[/quote']Its a tuner because it's needed to synchro summon Supreme iron dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 The DEF for the first card could've been lower. Supreme Iron Dragon: Nice pic and cool effect. Its just a synchro form of Total Defense Shogun.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 First Card:You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control 1 Defense Position monster. As long as this card remains on the field, increase the DEF of all monsters you control by 300. For the second card ask someone else becuase I dont understand it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asuka Reishim Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Lower DEF on 1st card but awesome cards otherwise 4 / 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitri Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 delete the effect in the sub-type from the first card the rest is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigy101 Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 delete the effect in the sub-type from the first card the rest is good thnx for the correction.i'm trying to find a way to properly state the final effect of Supreme Iron Dragon, any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Field isn't capitalised = field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 1900 def is too high for lv3 for Iron Shield Dragon, I'd drop it to 1500 def Supreme Iron Dragon reminds me of Total Defense Shogun's effect, which is good too 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigy101 Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I've made most of the corrections. I am still trying to find a way to make Supreme Iron Dragon's effect as unique as possible.Any ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 ok with the moddifications I'll raise the rate to 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigy101 Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 ok with the moddifications I'll raise the rate to 8.5/10 Thanks i guess. I was expecting higher though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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