Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Here's meh card[spoiler=The Card] [spoiler=Effect]When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned in this way you must pay 700 Life Points. Please Fix my OCG. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned in this way you must discard 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard. Near perfect already. Just minor changes. I THINK "Hand" is capitalized, not sure. Rate my cards (in my sig)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Near perfect already. Just minor changes. I THINK "Hand" is capitalized' date=' not sure. Rate my cards (in my sig)?[/quote'] It's not capitalized. Also, don't say "Rate my cards (in my sig)?" another time or I'll report you. I'm sorry but it's spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 True, thanks Halo Ring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Are you sure it's not capitalized? But, I understand your concern, but if I'm posting something constructive like an OCG fix and I put that in it's not THAT much spam? But whatever, if it makes you happy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Are you sure it's not capitalized? But' date=' I understand your concern, but if I'm posting something constructive like an OCG fix and I put that in it's not THAT much spam?[/quote'] "hand" is not capatilized. It is spam because in the last 3 or 4 threads, I've seen you say the exact same thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Alright, moved it to my signature. Thanks for bringing the "hand" to my attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 No i'm positive it's not capitalized And i'm not that worried about the SPAM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 And i'm not that worried about the SPAM But I am, I hate seeing spam all over the place when your trying to do something. Every little piece of spam counts. And the problem is fixed. Thanks Peppa! Edit - I knew I was right about "hand"! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Damnit, I have to edit my cards now... And there was no problem ever ;) *lol* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Yeah, but is everything else he Ocg fixed correct? except hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I don't know, he seems to know more than me. I just have experience from almost 10 years of Yugioh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 So is that a yes or a no? JK i'll update it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 OCG looks fine now, effect is a little simple, but it's practical so 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 If this card is destroyed by battle' date=' during your next Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon this card.[/quote'] Well here is the effect in a simplified form with correct OCG. It accomplishes the same thing basically, also this card is pretty simple if you ask me. I think it is UP for a single card from your hand and also I don't see a lot of decks using this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 well should i raise the ATK or make it a LP subtraction instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Life Points would be better maybe 700 Life Points, also raise the ATK to 1800. It should be fine after the fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Alright got it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 also you misspelled Phoenix in your card name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I don't know' date=' he seems to know more than me. I just have experience from almost 10 years of Yugioh.[/quote'] I only got 3 years XD OCG fix (not really) - When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. (I'm not sure if this makes a differnce but this is how I would write it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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