Forgetful Angel Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 This card can not be Special Summoned, when this card is summoned you may search your deck for 1 "Darkness Cloud" and put it in your hand. You may release 1 "Darkness Cloud" to increase the ATK of this monster by 700 till the end of the turn. You can only use this effect once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 The Darkness Cloud "...ATK of this monster by 700 till the end of the turn. You can only use this effect once per turn." Toxic Shroom"attacked" not "deffending"Toxic-counter not "Toxic Counter" When i saw thi pictures i LOLed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thank you, I fixed it. Yeah i wasn't going to post cards today, but when I saw them I had to make cards out of them, I felt a duty too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 [align=center]The pictures are good, but some wouldn't like them. (I do ;))The OCG is almost there. But the mistakes you made were all the right ones. As in, you used your brain and thought of words logicly, so you almost got some of them right. I don't usually give these to first cards, but I'm gonna give you a 9/10.These have potential of being very good cards. OCG Corrections: First cardplay Second CardSpecial SummonedSummonedDeckRelease = Tributecard = effect Third CardStand-by Phase = Standby Phaserelease = TributeDeck Fourth Carddefending = targeted[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 some OCG erorrs but they have been pointed out by Dr{}ne, so I don't need to tell you. The pics are pretty awful. The effects are Ok but a little too simple.#Overall 5/10, not bad for your first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 For the first two cards I'm surprised you had it Aqua type, yet DARK attribute, never seen that before 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 For the first two cards I'm surprised you had it Aqua type' date=' yet DARK attribute, never seen that before 8.8/10[/quote'] i haven't, so i guess that make these cards the first of there kind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 some OCG erorrs but they have been pointed out by Dr{}ne' date=' so I don't need to tell you. The pics are pretty awful. The effects are Ok but a little too simple.#Overall 5/10, not bad for your first try.[/quote'] Don't be harsh, it's a newbie your talking to. Newbies are like newborns (no offense). They need to be taught and cared for, and when they grow up to Level 4 (yay) they end up owning your @ss in contests because you taught them to good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I was surprised how good these were for your first cards. You have the potential of an AWESOME card maker. I would like to recommend you to this thread http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-137084-post-2646756.html#pid2646756 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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