radio414 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Hi.Can someone point out some OCG mistakes in this card? Lore:When a monster you control is destroyed as a result of battle, roll a die. Determine this card's effect by the result.1-2:Destroy the attacking monster3-5:Negate the attack, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Attack of the opposing monster6: Negate the attack and destroy all attack position monsters on the field. Increase your life points equal to the combined DEF of the destroyed monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 lol. = needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 lol. = needed. Any OCG you can point out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 First sentence should be: "When a monster you control is selected as an attack target..."roll a die = roll a six-sided die. attack position = Attack Position life points = Life Points Not bad card, the image and OCG is alright, and I always liked Die Roll effects. This is a bit overpowered though, considering there are no negative effects. It also seems more like a Continuous Spell Card to me. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Great. Thank you for your help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 It's a little OP'd. But your OCG seems good after the fixes. The pic is good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 So should I alter the effect or just perfect the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 once you fix up the OCG, the rate will be 8/10 for its creativeness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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