LiAM Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 [align=center]Firstly, I made it with an OCG error, want to see how many of you notice and which way sounds better (damn I just hinted). [/align] OCG errors :P Gonna point them out.-increase your Life Points by 600 == gain 600 Life Points-gains 400 ATK == increase this cards ATK by 400 ---Which way sounds better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Hmm, I think the last sentence should be: "Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Mecha Bunny" you control to gain 600 Life Points." Also.... It says Normal Summoned, then it says Tribute. However a Tribute Summon is still a Normal Summon, so I don't know if that's the error you purposely included. Anyway good card, the image is nice but it's not what I pictured by the title, the effect is kind of simple though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Hmm' date=' I think the last sentence should be: "Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Mecha Bunny" you control to gain 600 Life Points." Also.... It says Normal Summoned, then it says Tribute. However a Tribute Summon is still a Normal Summon, so I don't know if that's the error you purposely included. Anyway good card, the image is nice but it's not what I pictured by the title, the effect is kind of simple though. 8/10[/quote'] The effect is short because this is an example card of the custom image I made. Normal+Tribute+Flip Summon are the same thing. So in newer OCG, they use Normal. The error is either the gain or increase.Gonna point them out.-increase your Life Points by 600 == gain 600 Life Points-gains 400 ATK == increase this cards ATK by 400 ---Which way sounds better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Personally I think "Increase" sounds better, but the newer OCG uses "gain" By the way, didn't know the image was custom made, nice work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 lol ;D It's gain for some reason, it's shorter to write, so you can fit more on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Nice card and a original effect a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 don't know why you didn't just make it 500 atk gain and increase your LP by 500, but whatever 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 don't know why you didn't just make it 500 atk gain and increase your LP by 500' date=' but whatever 9/10[/quote'] Because that's boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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