iGrowlithe Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I tried super hard on these. Please Critic honestly.I dont own any of this art either.They are kinda over powered...I admit..but only kinda. Furui Tensai - Furui Yochi GatewayThis card gets the following effects based on the number of "Furui Yochi" monsters you control: 1. This card cannot be destroyed. 2. Once per turn, you can half the ATK and DEF of 1 face up monster your opponent controls. 3. You can send 1 "Furui Yochi" monster you control to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card. 4. Once per turn you can draw 1 card. 5. Destroy this card to destroy all cards on the field. Special Summon any number of Level 4 or lower "Furui Yochi" monsters from your Graveyard.: \ More to come soon.Cards such as... Furui Yochi - Tiamat Do Ra GonFurui Yochi - Diety Archfiend DragonFurui Tensai - Connection Between Man And Beast ******NEW CARDS!!!*******[insert sparkles and shinny effects] This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 "Furui Yochi" monsters you control. When this card is Summoned you can pay 1000 life points to destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the combined ATK and DEF of the monsters used to Summon this card.1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Summoned, destroy all face down monsters your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your Hand to destroy a monster your opponent controls. During the End Phase of the turn this card destroyed a monster by battle you can Special Summon 1 "Furui Yochi" monster from your Graveyard. *****SECOND UPDATE******(two in a day? I must be bored) *****THIRD UPDATE*****(Getting crazy now) Furui Yochi - The Final Diety 1 Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner monsters This card can only be Summoned if you have exactly 3 LIGHT monsters with "Diety" in their names in your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned both players send all other cards on their field and in their hands to the Graveyard. When this card attacks neither player can activate Spell and Trap cards. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card. Furui Yochi - Astral Harpoon Dragon 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Tribute this card to negate the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that targets any "Furui Yochi" monster you control. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by its own Effect, Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Cyber Stein's effect is WAY too simple Sinful Betrayal's effect is identical to brain control and OPed anyway 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Couldnt think to much of what I wanted to do with Cyber Stein. Hes like that for now. Im gonna change his effect later. I also wanted to make some cards like an ancient version of the older cards (hence sin and stein) thats why betrayl is similar. I guess the quick play aspect is kinda OP.Bump: Please Rate. Took a long time to just get ignored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkshadow321s Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 these are some pretty nice cards 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 These are pretty Original, so i give you 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 Why thank you. Surprisingly no one commented on the art.lolBump: Please Rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 bump:Please Rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 3 days later. No rates. Not cool. Please Rate dont just view... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 ah, glad to see you updates. Pics are great and colorful Gren Coko's effect a little too simple, but otherwise well done 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 I wanted to make a deck serch card.Its generic but every set needs a deck skimmer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 I think a searcher would be nice or a card that enables you to discard one to the graveyard and in return you could draw cards or sp. summon one from deck. just a suggestion, other than that the art is very cool i think it fits well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Yeah that is what Coko is for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 bump:Rate please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 These are quite well done for a new member. The pics look good. The OCG seems good. (Yay) Just a couple basic effects but that's okay some good cards are basic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZedsAlive Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 9.00001/9.00002just kidding 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Why thank you. That was a convidence booster, ha ha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 I'm stealing your pics. There's no way you're stopping me either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Lol. I love the art aswell. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 lol, well you do have good images :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I strive to find the better ones.I never use photobucket. Thats were most lame images come from ha ha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafronzo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Why hasnt anyone commented these theyre far more impressive than most cards i've seen lately.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Oh!Well that was a self confidence booster :DThank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafronzo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I sware these Cards could be better. You just need to fix your OCG and try making a larger variety of effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Well any suggestions?I would love to know where my OCG errors are. I hate that Im not doing this correctly the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonknight315 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 OMG these are near perfect cards! they need to have high stats. 9.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999998/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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