Womi Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 I decided my contest-winning card in a thread. I just want some comments, especially about creativity, balance and OCG. [spoiler=Durnwhip Grindylow] the text is readable, I think. Okay, start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haze Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 this is a pretty good card i dont really see any errors (im ok at finding them i guesss) but i do like this card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 You may have to put '...or Set.' at the end of the first sentance, depending on whether that's an oversight or on purpose.Also, 'he/she' = 'they' Flipping bizarre. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Thank you two, especially for the OCG corrections. Is it balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 pic is unimpressive, but the OCG and effect are balanced enough 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 thank you.^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Hey bud =DSmall OCG fix:Field = fieldOpponent's = opponent'sAttack Target = attack target Probably more.Pretty good card though. It's balance is very much fine, 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 OCG errorshis/ her = their/ theyOpponent = opponentField = fieldSet IDchosen = selectedchoose = select Other stuffGood idea. However, the set rule is unlikely unless you have the right Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Thank you two! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 No probz ;D Well are there more cards in this set? Cause that might help. And, instead of the set idea, why didn't you just create an Arch-Type? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 No, this card was only for a contest, no set.And I'm tired of archetypes. ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 bumping up my post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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