cerberus21 Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 [spoiler= READ MEH!!!] All images are from google, ask, yahoo, or wizards.com. all credit goes to the original artists. I'm fairly confident in the OCG of this set, but OCG isn't exactly my strong-suit. Any criticism and correction will accepted w/o complaint. I was really hoping for more than, you know, zero posts.A bunch of people have viewed the thread, but no one is posting... how about some ratings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 really cool.I see no OCG errors.Perfect 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 perty good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 ^thx for the feedback. Anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Overall, quite good, but there are repeating OCG errors and this set overall lacks direction. There is no 'Trump Card' or 'Ultimate Monster' as it were. [spoiler=Suggestions and OCG fixes. Done in order.]- Celtic Mageknight is overpowered, increase to Lv.5.- 'special summon' = 'Special Summon'- 'two' = '2'- Depth Slayer, you can say: 'Discard 2 card from your hand...' : you don't need the 'to the Graveyard' part.- 'level' = 'Level'- '(except this card)' = ', except this card'- Hell Dragon, you don't need '...Life Points,' you can just say, 'to your opponent'. Also, it's overpowered.- 'deck' = 'Deck'- Infernal Blader. Second sentence: "During your End Phase, you can Tribute this monster to Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower "Chaos Knight" monster from your Graveyard."- King of the After, increase to Lv.7- Royal Flyzar, "During each of your Standby Phases, you can Tribute 1 "Chaos Knight" monster on your side of the field, except this card. If you do, gain 500 Life Points.- Time Ravager, "During each of your Standby Phases, you can Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard whose Level is 1 more than the Level of the Tributed monster.- Midnight Mech, possibly overpowered.- Decaptal, very overpowered. Add a balancing effect, remove the second part of the effect, or reduce the ATK and DEF severley.- Golex, effect is too similar to "Spellcanceller"'s; come up with a new one.- Haalu. Basic effect and it will have to be treated as a "Chaos Knight" monster.- Kylok. Same problems as Haalu.- Rogue Commander, reduce the ATK gain.- "Forsaken Knights of Chaos" in general. Very basic and overused effects. Try to be more imaginative. You could make them more powerful and restrict how they are summoned; make them superior counterparts to the "Choas Knights".- Sky Mutoid, pic looks siphoned, OCG errors.- Chaos Burst, very overpowered. Reduce it to 2 cards destroyed.- Chaotic Future, rather self-destructive don't you think? And possibly overpowered.- Deviant Insanity. Very overused effect in this set. Try to come up with something different.- Sabotage. "Tribute 1 "Forsaken Knight of Chaos" on your side of the field. Destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field." Underpowered.- War of Chaos. Rather destructive. I see no positive benefit.- Furious Resentment. At last! The link to these two sets. You might want to consider bringing them closer. Because otherwise the "Forsaken Knights of Chaos" will be very hard to summon. You may wish to make them more powerful and add restrictive summoning conditions. Overall, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evo Chief Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Not very original pictures.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avalon Takai Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 a problem with the "forsaken knight of chaos-decaptal" its attack is 3000 yet, it can attack twice and deals double damage to life points... if opponent had 1 monster and it was attack posistion 2000 attack... 2000 damage dealt on attack and seconds attack is 6000... instant kill, abit overpowerd for my taste... maybe if this attacks a monster, it cant attack directly to atleast balance it a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Overall' date=' quite good, but there are repeating OCG errors and this set overall lacks direction. There is no 'Trump Card' or 'Ultimate Monster' as it were. [spoiler=Suggestions and OCG fixes. Done in order.']- Celtic Mageknight is overpowered, increase to Lv.5.- 'special summon' = 'Special Summon'- 'two' = '2'- Depth Slayer, you can say: 'Discard 2 card from your hand...' : you don't need the 'to the Graveyard' part.- 'level' = 'Level'- '(except this card)' = ', except this card'- Hell Dragon, you don't need '...Life Points,' you can just say, 'to your opponent'. Also, it's overpowered.- 'deck' = 'Deck'- Infernal Blader. Second sentence: "During your End Phase, you can Tribute this monster to Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower "Chaos Knight" monster from your Graveyard."- King of the After, increase to Lv.7- Royal Flyzar, "During each of your Standby Phases, you can Tribute 1 "Chaos Knight" monster on your side of the field, except this card. If you do, gain 500 Life Points.- Time Ravager, "During each of your Standby Phases, you can Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard whose Level is 1 more than the Level of the Tributed monster.- Midnight Mech, possibly overpowered.- Decaptal, very overpowered. Add a balancing effect, remove the second part of the effect, or reduce the ATK and DEF severley.- Golex, effect is too similar to "Spellcanceller"'s; come up with a new one.- Haalu. Basic effect and it will have to be treated as a "Chaos Knight" monster.- Kylok. Same problems as Haalu.- Rogue Commander, reduce the ATK gain.- "Forsaken Knights of Chaos" in general. Very basic and overused effects. Try to be more imaginative. You could make them more powerful and restrict how they are summoned; make them superior counterparts to the "Choas Knights".- Sky Mutoid, pic looks siphoned, OCG errors.- Chaos Burst, very overpowered. Reduce it to 2 cards destroyed.- Chaotic Future, rather self-destructive don't you think? And possibly overpowered.- Deviant Insanity. Very overused effect in this set. Try to come up with something different.- Sabotage. "Tribute 1 "Forsaken Knight of Chaos" on your side of the field. Destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field." Underpowered.- War of Chaos. Rather destructive. I see no positive benefit.- Furious Resentment. At last! The link to these two sets. You might want to consider bringing them closer. Because otherwise the "Forsaken Knights of Chaos" will be very hard to summon. You may wish to make them more powerful and add restrictive summoning conditions. Overall, 7/10.thx for all the work you put into rating my cards :). even so, i disagree w/ just 1 thing: -Celtic Mageknight is fairly balanced as is. It can't attack directly, so even w/ its double attack ability, it can't inflict severe damage. If it needed a tribute, it would be a weaker version of the already terrible "Twin Headed Beast". It basically primes your opponent for cards like Cyber Dragon and Gorz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 great archetype, but some of the cards are overpowered. i'd also add some swarm cards into the series since they tribute themselves so much. I can also tell you got some of the pics from magic the gathering. I'd give it a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 great archetype' date=' but some of the cards are overpowered. i'd also add some swarm cards into the series since they tribute themselves so much. I can also tell you got some of the pics from magic the gathering. I'd give it a 9/10.[/quote']You caught me. I don't like MTG as a card game, but the art is cool. The images from Magic are the ones from the Wizards site. I agree, i could have made some swarm cards, theyd work well here. I'll rep you tomorrow, sephiran, ive used all my reps for the day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Overall' date=' quite good, but there are repeating OCG errors and this set overall lacks direction. There is no 'Trump Card' or 'Ultimate Monster' as it were. [spoiler=Suggestions and OCG fixes. Done in order.']- Celtic Mageknight is overpowered, increase to Lv.5.- 'special summon' = 'Special Summon'- 'two' = '2'- Depth Slayer, you can say: 'Discard 2 card from your hand...' : you don't need the 'to the Graveyard' part.- 'level' = 'Level'- '(except this card)' = ', except this card'- Hell Dragon, you don't need '...Life Points,' you can just say, 'to your opponent'. Also, it's overpowered.- 'deck' = 'Deck'- Infernal Blader. Second sentence: "During your End Phase, you can Tribute this monster to Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower "Chaos Knight" monster from your Graveyard."- King of the After, increase to Lv.7- Royal Flyzar, "During each of your Standby Phases, you can Tribute 1 "Chaos Knight" monster on your side of the field, except this card. If you do, gain 500 Life Points.- Time Ravager, "During each of your Standby Phases, you can Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard whose Level is 1 more than the Level of the Tributed monster.- Midnight Mech, possibly overpowered.- Decaptal, very overpowered. Add a balancing effect, remove the second part of the effect, or reduce the ATK and DEF severley.- Golex, effect is too similar to "Spellcanceller"'s; come up with a new one.- Haalu. Basic effect and it will have to be treated as a "Chaos Knight" monster.- Kylok. Same problems as Haalu.- Rogue Commander, reduce the ATK gain.- "Forsaken Knights of Chaos" in general. Very basic and overused effects. Try to be more imaginative. You could make them more powerful and restrict how they are summoned; make them superior counterparts to the "Choas Knights".- Sky Mutoid, pic looks siphoned, OCG errors.- Chaos Burst, very overpowered. Reduce it to 2 cards destroyed.- Chaotic Future, rather self-destructive don't you think? And possibly overpowered.- Deviant Insanity. Very overused effect in this set. Try to come up with something different.- Sabotage. "Tribute 1 "Forsaken Knight of Chaos" on your side of the field. Destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field." Underpowered.- War of Chaos. Rather destructive. I see no positive benefit.- Furious Resentment. At last! The link to these two sets. You might want to consider bringing them closer. Because otherwise the "Forsaken Knights of Chaos" will be very hard to summon. You may wish to make them more powerful and add restrictive summoning conditions. Overall, 7/10.well he pretty much covered it all. You seem to be having great potential. Just work on your OCG and youll be great. for now 8/10. I look orward to seeing more of your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 I Agree with Max and Evo Cheif Overall: 8/10 Oh yeah, your so called "Infernal Blader" is Raiden from MGS4 with his visor down and the pic for "Furious Resistance" is Ryu at the end of Street Fighter 4 (Hadoukening a machine that somehow awakens his setsui no hado) and "Rogue Commander" is Cloud from Final Fantasy Jesus H. Christ with all the video game characters, yeah so the point is get some original pics. One more thing, i've seen at least each one of those pics once in another thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Well, those are some pretty fancy shmancy cards ya gots thereI dost giveth you a 8.5/10-.5 for nor having enough 4 or under stars-1 for a little OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I'm no longer giving out reps, but ratings are still welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob6993 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 the chaos knights have awesome artwork Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARDCREATOR3.5 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 ill give a 9.5 .5 for the OCG errors but still great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 ^ thx new guys. As for the artwork, my favorite one is Collossin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyleraraujo Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 A little OPed, but what can ya do? 9.99999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Yeah, i couldn't think of a unique drawback for Decaptal, so i posted it w/o 1 to see what people could come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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