dorkof Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 OCG errors, way too simple effects 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dorkof Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 dont careread icyblue's OCG THREAD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
souske88 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Bad pictures, need slightly better grammer, simple is okay, but no variety. Ice wolf should have at least 5 stars. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brager56 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 you have some errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Lawless Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Look, over there!Normals aren't really good, lacks creativity. Pics are bland, bluury, have borders and no backgrounds.check out an OCG thread or copy+paste from a real card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Noes. Errors And And bad Pics. 1.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 "Icy Wolf" needs an effect, it shows creativity. OCG fixes: "All face-up Beast-Type monsters gain 500 ATK" ""Angel Wolf" + "Ice Wolf"" "Destroy 1 face-up Warrior-Type monster on the field." My only suggestion is to think of more creative effect, because even if the OCG isn't great, at least the effort would be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JrockerAngel7 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 the pics are ok. the effects are too simple. Your fusion monster needs the proper OCG. Don't see "Angel Wolf" anywhere. "Beastly Power" needs to be fleshed out more. And yeah i agree with (zer0) Discord no creativity. Though, its a nice try. Keep working at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 OCG errors, bad pics, blah blah blah blah 2.5/10Oh and simple effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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