Bloodrun Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 thank you i am working on the organization cards now should have them up soon cool =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
8axel8 Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Your cards are good, but the wording and the grammar could be a little better. If these are your first cards, then they aren't bad. I'll give you a 7/10. The more you make, the easier it gets to make good cards. The way I tried to do mine is to look at some real YGO cards and see how their effects are worded. It helps. Trust me. After you make a lot of cards, it will get a lot harder to make some new effects though.... Also, please review my Kingdom Hearts set. EDIT: Also, try not to invent your own types. Use the 20 official ones. (There may be more, I don't have the newest rule book.) If you need a new type, put it beside the real type. Like for Nobodies, put: "[insert type here] / Nobody" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Good job! 7.825 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Don't you even check your spelling? You need to add "" around all names in effects, and it's "Sephiroth." Honestly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted December 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 srry dint know how to spell Sephiroth. thks for the comments organization cards are getting done as we speak any donations on pics would be great. yeah i am looking at card effects on real cards to see how they relate to the ones thks for the tip anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 update first of the organization cards this is where all cards are going from here on in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 good but some are a bit oerpowered some spelling capitalization and OCG errors 6/10:shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoloa37 Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 work on the effects, the pics, and the basic structure of the cards. i know this is a little late but i believe in better late than never. i rate them a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted January 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 okay thks guys i used google and photobucket to get the pics i never got any constant pics though so any good references to sites would be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 plese rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 great card i love kingdom hearts 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 cool thks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 no worries Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 there ok... but really this should be in the Any Other Cards section 6/10.. some are overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Ok, a bit overpowered. but still, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 thks more of these coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 yay more kingdom hearts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Natedog, your sig is too big I think, try to shorten it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Natedog you will be reported unless you shorten your sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 im currently trying to shorten itit will happen dont worry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Ok, good job, Spoiolers are good. Thanks Natedog! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 its OK i worked it out after a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Nice job man, I wosh I could do Spoiolers. >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 its easy ill send it to you in a PM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Ok, thanks. BTW, this is my last post of the day, #86! 0.o, life? what life? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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