Dragoone Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 [align=center]The seal is broken... time to re-merge¡ IDEA: The Pentagram Sealed Beast idea came to me like a shock this morning, it is not part of my already existing Wolfs Vs Dragons, still the Sealeds... well... you will see it when i show... stil... the idea was a shock. chained beasts, seals, and more¡ it will have like 10 to 30 cards the fully set but... here are them¡[spoiler=EN001] 5 Turns after this card is activated, take from your deck a "Ilussion of Pentagram" and play it. [spoiler=EN002] 3 Turns after this card is activated, take from your deck a "Activation of Pentagram" and play it. [spoiler=EN003] This card can only be played with the ffect of "S3aled Pentagram". Remove this card from play to take and summon a "Illusion Chained Spirit of Pentagram" from your deck. [spoiler=EN004] This card can only be played with the ffect of "Sealed Pentagram". 3 Turns after this card is activated remove this card from play to take and summon a "Chained Beast of the Pentagram: Spirit " from your deck. [spoiler=EN005] This card can't be target of an attack. Once a turn, discard the first card on the top of your Deck, this card gains the follow effect depend on the card type: .-Monster/Effect: Increase the ATK of this monster until your End Phase. -Spell or Trap: Decrease the in 500 ATK of this monster in 500 until your End Phase [spoiler=EN006][/img]This card can only be summoned by the effect of "Activation of Pentagram". Just one time discard the card on the top of your Deck, this card gains the follow effect depending on the card type:.- Monster: If this card is removed from the field by result of a battle, remove from play the discarded card and Speccial Summon this card. -Spell or Trap: If this card is used as a Synchro Fusion material, remove from play the discarded card to speccial summon this card. [spoiler=EN007] This card is used to Ritual Summon " Burning Pentagram Beast: Doom". You must also offer monster you control whose total Level equal 9 or more. [spoiler=EN008] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s) If you play a "Burning Pentagram" and this card is on the field, this card must be used as tribute [spoiler=EN009] This card can't be Speccial Summoned or Set, this card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Burning Pentagram". When this card attacks a Warrior-type or a WIND monster, increase the ATK of this card in 1000 until your End Phase. [spoiler=EN010] This card cannot be Summoned or Set, this card can only be Speccial Summoned by tributing a "Burning Pentagram Beast: DOOM" of your control. When this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all the monsters with "Pentagram" on it's name. [spoiler=EN011] This card can only be equipped to a "Pentagram" monster. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster in 500 by each card "Pentagram" of your control. [spoiler=EN012] Increase the ATK of all "Pentagram" Monsters in 200 by each Pentagram Counter this card have. Remove all your Pentagram Counters to deal equal damage to the number of removed Pentagram Counters x 200. [spoiler=EN012] IMG CREDIT: Cropping + rezising: ME ORIGINAL ART: Deviantart[/align] FIRST 9 CARDS Slideshow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 S3aled Pentagram? anyway... Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Positionhis/ her = they/ their Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Thanks, they will come in handy when i make more ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Not bad, I'm not a huge fan of the images, the OCG could use a bit of work, and the effects are a little hard to understand. From what I can get, they look fairly balanced. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 yup, i got a HARD work to make the two editions of my last beast [lvl 5 synchroh and lvl 9 Ritual] the effects truly are hard but... EN006 practicaly, one time when you are gonna to synchro fusion or your opponent get a high lvl monster, draw a card and discard it, if its a monster, remove the discarded card of the game, and speccial summon the EN006, and if its a spell or a trap when you do Synchro fusion and the monster is discarded/destroyed call it again to the field by removing from play the spell or trap card you got when you drawd that is on graveyard still complicated, but is a good way to always have a card on field (the effect can only be used 1 time) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 the 6th card pic is verey bad, i don think you should have a dead wolf with blood on it, thats chained, it ovensive and just wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 the first two cards look WAY too similar in pics, effects are too bland as well on the 6th card, I'm not seeing the atk/def stats on it. Did you give it any? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 the 6th card pic is verey bad, i don think you should have a dead wolf with blood on it, thats chained, it ovensive and just wrong.---Maybe it dont look at simple sigth, but the chains and much of the blood is made by pc, simply zoom it and the chain is made with a graphic program [photoshop/gimp] and just have some blood on teeth [Rest if its dinner] ^^Disclaimer: NO ANIMALS WHERE HURT WHILE MAKING THIS CARDS.---the first two cards look WAY too similar in pics, effects are too bland as well on the 6th card, I'm not seeing the atk/def stats on it. Did you give it any? ...Ouch i totally forgot¡ the pic i took was before putting the cards [i had problems with the uploader] and the first two cards are the [first] Fake card of the second, give a waste of time, is used mostly to confuse [second] the true card, but not the real deal, the pic of both was edited to be [first] down, [second] up, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 You really need to work on your OCG. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 thanks by commenting...S3aled Pentagram?---Yup, is... well... you should read the story of the how, in few words, S3aled pentagram is the fake that humes made to confuse the Beasts... they sealed them onto its own seals without knowing they where like grass. they find a way out of its prision [earth],.. still adding 3 new cards including a Ritual and a synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Bump, im going to post the card number ten in a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkrose Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I am sorry to say that if one was to use this cards it would just take forever to play a monster as it takes I don't know how many turns to play a monster. Like someone has already said someone might find these pics offensive.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 i know the bloody wolf pic is offensive, but as i said, is a cute puppy in the floor, all the blood, chain and including the collar is made by pc, still tnxs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 glad to see more updates. The OCG needs a little work, but the pics are quite well done 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 thanks so much, ^^ i do a full search for the best graphics and underused [uu] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 What sites you went to for the graphics? Or did you do it yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 As i said [i think i said it] i use "Deviantart" to find pics, i take like 30 mins to find a UU pic but with great usability, if it dont have BG or have one i dont like i just edit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 OCG errors, Bad pics and bad effect's 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 BAD PICS MY **** GRRR, BAD PICS¡... calm down me... calm... breath... THIS PICS ARE THE BETTER ONES YOUR EYES WILL SEE EVER¡ ¬_¬ still... do not dare to do a opinion of my pics again ¬_¬sorry by overreacting, is just that... the graphic is my life, and these are the best ones i could edit, tell me what is a "Good" pic for you... still... your oppinion is apreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Updated with one new card, still i try to find a great pic to use Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 The Penta Sword's effect is meh, just like a lot of other equip cards, nothing new. Please give it another effect 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 ok tnxs, what about the 12? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Whether the chained wolf pic is real or not, change it. It doesn't look like a Yu-Gi-Oh card and I assure you, there is no shortage of animated wolf pictures on the Internets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 thats what ya think... i made a LARGE pic surfing, like 3 days picking the best things i could get, and just like 200 pics out of 2000 so, There are animated wolf pics, and if there are not good? I MAKE EM BETTER¡ still thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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