Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Rate and Comment. [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 Machine-Type and 1 Warrior-Type monster you control or from your hand. This card loses 200 ATK for each of your unoccupied Spell & Trap Card Zones. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon it to your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position. If this card was Special Summoned this way, the controller cannot conduct their Draw Phase as long as this card remains in Attack Position. During your 4th End Phase after this card was Special Summoned under your opponent's control, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 not bad, though giving your opponent a 2700 atk monster and preventing them from drawing PERMANENTLY seems a bit too much. You should have just said they'd have to skip their draw phase for the next 3 turns or something 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Well you're obviously not going to have all of your Spell and Trap card zones filled so the ATK will be lowered. Your opponent can easily Tribute it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Yeah, it's a lot like Lava Golem's effect, though 1000 pts of damage is much better to handle than losing your drawing phase PERMANENTLY. It's the same trick, make sure your opponent can't atk with it or tribute it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 See they can attack with it and tribute it, that's the drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 it was the same way with Lava Golem. The difference is the loss of the draw phase is a much bigger loss than merely 1000 LP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 rag is right, the duel is basically over when this card is destroyed, if ur opponent can nvr draw a card again :Plol.OP'd. by far.change the effectthe pic isnt bad.not gonna rate, becuz i think u just worded the effect wrong with the draw phase thing...right now u hav it so ur opponent can never draw again. period. u need to give it some sort of a limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 glad to see you share my view, NickLD. If you lose your draw ability PERMANENTLY there's no way to win. Hell, even if you changed the effect so that the instant your opponent gets that monster off his side of the field, he wins the duel, the effect is still far too powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Ok, your opponent can easily tribute it whenever they feel like it. Or they can use change of heart to switch it back to me, then I cannot conduct my battle phase. Again, I can easily tribute it or discard it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 oh please. You would have something to prevent your opponent from doing that. And Change of Heart is banned, remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I know it is banned, it was an example. How about if they can't conduct their draw phase as long as it remains in attack position. Would that be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 certainly better since it's much easier to simply switch it to defense position. Unless of course you activate Final Attack Orders or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Well I wouldn't have, because I never heard of that card before lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 basically it's a continuous trap that forces all monsters to stay in atk position as long as it's face up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Sweet, changed BTW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I'll raise the rating, but only up to 7.7/10 because I still feel it's too powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I added something else, how is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 NOW it's much better. It'll only burn your opponent for 4 turns, and that's reasonable I'll raise the rate to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Okay, thanks for all the help. It's actually part of a set that I am trying to make. It's theme is various lockdowns, as this one's was the draw phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Your OCG looks good and the effect is good and is balanced in my opinion. The picture is also quite good as well. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Thank you, I will be posting another like it within the next 5 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I still see no update to that here....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I posted it in another thread. BK 508 I think it is called. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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