CARDCREATOR3.5 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Hey everyone I'm a real newbie to this just let me know what you think. DEADLY DRAGON'S REVENGE(SNEAK PEEK)(I don't know to do a spoiler ]= sorry)Effect=This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Human Sacrifice". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. When this card is successfully Summoned remove 2 cards in your hand from play to prevent this monster from the effects of spell and trap cards.thnx 4 the OCG herbie i dont own any of my pics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I would NEVER use this card.Unless it has some type of freaking amazing support cards. Otherwise, everyone hates Vanillas. Its ok for a newbie card.Um...in the name dont use : use a comma or a hyphine ( - )Looks better.Or dont use any of them.Since your new ill give you a 6/10Make sure you make some amazing support cards for this baby! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARDCREATOR3.5 Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I would NEVER use this card.Unless it has some type of freaking amazing support cards. Otherwise' date=' everyone hates Vanillas. Its ok for a newbie card.Um...in the name dont use : use a comma or a hyphine ( - )Looks better.Or dont use any of them.Since your new ill give you a 6/10Make sure you make some amazing support cards for this baby! ;)[/quote'] They are already made :] and what are vanillas?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 there is no advantage to this cardmaybe if it took the cards from your opponents hand?like thestalos with out the burn but the added card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I wouldnt use this card either.It has only a draw back to it.Unless you wana use it in a Dark World kind of setting. 3/10 Try again.Oh and your OCG needs work too. Vanillas=Normal MonstersOCG=On Card Grammar? Thats what I call it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Ocg is way off, 7 stars is not enough for the power this card has, probably 9 stars would be good.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I would NEVER use this card.Unless it has some type of freaking amazing support cards. Otherwise' date=' everyone hates Vanillas. Its ok for a newbie card.Um...in the name dont use : use a comma or a hyphine ( - )Looks better.Or dont use any of them.Since your new ill give you a 6/10Make sure you make some amazing support cards for this baby! ;)[/quote'] It would go very well with Gren Maju Da Eiza if it had a better effect such as remove 5 cards in your graveyard from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 When it was a Vanilla it didnt have an effect.lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 OCG needs some work and the effect is very simple, very nice pic though. 6.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 OCG=On Card Grammar? Thats what I call it. Original Card Grammar. Also, don't put theeffectlikethis. Just do it in one smooth line. Pic is awesome but effect is....ugh. 4 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I don't see the ritual spell card for this 2950 is too high for lv7 anyway 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 make it level 8i'd also lower DEF by 500it should read"This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Curse of the Masked Beast". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. When this card is successfully Summoned remove 2 cards in your hand from play."my OCG is not great but i think that sounds better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARDCREATOR3.5 Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Thnx guys and i think i've got an idea for a better effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Now that you raised the level I'll raise the rate to 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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