Armadyl Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Effect: At the end of your Battle Phase pay 4000 Life Points to send 4 cards from your Graveyard back in to your Deck and shuffle it. Draw 1 card, if it is a monster Effect card it is destroyed. Picture Credit: http://kona4tacos.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 OCG is off, I really think this card is underpowered, Too many life points for the effect, probably 2000 at max, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 xbon. I agree with him. lol.It is way to much payment for something like that. Kind of like Miracle Dig but more draw back.I say that you should take down the life points like xbon said. Oh and its : draw 1 card. If that card is an Effect Monster discard it to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 i wouldn't even pay that much lifepoints for that effectbut on the other hand putting spell cards back into your deck is a massive advantage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 [quote='Armadyl' pid='2723109' dateline='1249194188'] [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/ndnw4.jpg[/IMG] [center][b]Effect:[/b][/center][b] [b]At the end of your Battle Phase pay 4000 Life Points to send 4 cards from your Graveyard back in to your Deck and shuffle it. Draw 1 card, if it is a monster Effect card it is destroyed.[/b] Picture Credit: http://kona4tacos.deviantart.com/ [/quote] OCG is off and UndrPwrd as everyone else said. I'd say pay 800 LP it's no better then premature buriel. And the picture is too graphic when making cards I suggest more cartooney pictures. Anime is a very good use. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 DB-OP.(Draw Back Overload... maybe new term? Created by TDA-Great :]) Anyways I would not pay 4000 Life Points for that card. Change it to 1500.OCG is ok, there are some errors. Idea is there, but your trying to hard to keep it balanced by making it 4000 Life Points. Right now my rate is 7.5/10Change the errors to something more useful and balanced and I might give you a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armadyl Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Graveyard Void CorrectedSryy about naming thread dark void i was thinking of darkrai(pokemon) lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Better, BUT, OCG error, Graveyard should be capitalized, AND, It should say, Select 4 cards from your Graveyard and send them to your deck. Something along the lines of that, I can't get it right, but I know the OCG is wrong on that part. because of this I have to dock points, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Lol Darkrai.Crappiest pokemon ever. Anyway, I say...better.Still a few things that are strange to me.Im OCD so the 1800 is really bothering me.But yeah...ok card. Why at the end of Battle Phase.And if you are playing it in the Battle Phase it has to be a quick play.Why not just at the beginning of your main phase 2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Lol Darkrai.Crappiest pokemon ever. Anyway' date=' I say...better.Still a few things that are strange to me.Im OCD so the 1800 is really bothering me.But yeah...ok card. Why at the end of Battle Phase.And if you are playing it in the Battle Phase it has to be a quick play.Why not just at the beginning of your main phase 2?[/quote'] What is OCD?1800 is a good amount, not too high, not too low. And yeah, I guess it does have to be a quick play or counter or something, so 8/10, I didn't see that part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 OCD= Obsessive Compulsive DisorderYou know like things to be neat and taken care of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 You should edit the new card you did in the first post. OCG in the second attempt is better other than the errors that xbon pointed out. The pic is ok i guess and goes with the name. The card is still a bit underpowered paying 1800 Life Points just to pick out 4 cards and possibility that you lose a card straight as you draw the card. But it is more balanced than the one you posted in the first post. 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Wait. How is it overpowered?...is confused... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I changed it, i used the wrong word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Effect is sound, though the OCG looks slightly off 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 alot better than beforealthough i think the OCG is still a little off8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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