))Raven(( Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 [align=center]This was made out of boredom. [spoiler=IMG Cred]1-3=Hunter [spoiler=EN000]If this card attacks a monster, the attacked monster is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally.).During each of your Main Phases, you can decrease your Life Points by 700 to inflict 1000 Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. [spoiler=EN001]This card can only be Summoned by Tributing at least 1(up to 3) monsters. For each Monster Card you Tributed, you may activate 1 of the following effects:1: Select 1 DARK monster on the field and destroy it.2: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field3: Inflict 1500 Damage to your opponent's Life Points [spoiler=EN002]This card can only be summoned by sacrificing 500 Life Points. This card returns to it's owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card was Summoned. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for every Spellcaster-Type monster you control. This card can attack your opponent directly. [spoiler=Updates]Cards 4-5 will be up later today.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Dark Flame's effect is very good, burn and all, but it needs a drawback Neihart's effect reminds me of that Dark Dragon King's effect 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Hello?Any one else commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Chaos Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 both of the cards sort of look like black magician of chaospics could be betterfirst effect needs a drawbackbut these are great cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 1)Really? Never thought so2)Well I like the Pics alot3)Has been stated before,Mind suggesting one4)Thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Good cards, pretty balanced.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 The longer Dark Flame - Destroyer of Worlds is on the field, the more the opponents despair will raise..and just in the moment he killed him. Another Monster is Special Summoned. I love him^^The 2nd card would be Special Summoned if you just have to Tribute 1 Monster Card or am i wrong ?so it should be called Special Summon.. Anyways i like these cards, their balanced and good OCG8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 I find the OCG good, but when you mention effects, after stating those Tributes necessary, don't put "For 1 Tribute", instead put "1:" That's it in OCG terms. They know your speaking about Tributes, so that's the only thing you need to list. You forgot the . + space in the effect of Dark Flame- Destroyer of Worlds. I'm talking about the, "If this card attacks a monster the attacked monster is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)DuringIt should be: "If this card attacks a monster, the attacked monster is not destroyed (Damage Calculation is applied normally.). During..... That's what I saw mainly. I also saw, "....you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. As for the 2nd card, get rid of up to 3, then add a 4th Tributed monster effect. In the second effect, for the 2 Tributes, you spelt "Field" wrong. And for the third tribute, "Damage" should be "damage". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 TTTThanks for the constructive critasm DR.Gentle thx YGOThx I knew I spelled field wrong.lol+ rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkrose Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 There are minor OCG errors like capitalization and Grave is supposed to be Graveyard as someone had already said before. The cards are not bad effects are nice the pic could be better but if thats what you liked its ok. overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairo Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 7.5/10pretty good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 RoseThx FairioThx for the spam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 For Tinos, you just said it can't be special summoned, but right after it, you can it can be summoned by paying 500 LP. Wouldn't that include special summon anyway? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 ThxMeesa Tired.Will Update Later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 great card ideas. effects are nice. pics are good. ~8.9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 In the second card you mispelled Field, you wrote "feild", and about the last card, if it returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase...how about making it a Spirit Monster? Very nice cards though. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 I like them all. They all seem playable and fun. Balanced and useful. 9/10 with minor OCG error Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 your first cardThis would be correct OCGIf this card attacks a monster, the attacked monster is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)During each of your Main Phases, you can decrease your Life Points by 700 to inflict 1000 Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. second:This card can only be Summoned by Tributing at least 1(up to 3) monsters. For each Monster Card (else just "monster") you Tributed, you may activate 1 of the following effects:-For 1: Select 1 DARK monster on the field and destroy it.-For 2 Tributes: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field-For 3 Tributes: Inflict 1500 Damage to your opponent's Life Points third:This card cannot be Special Summoned.This card can only be summoned by sacrificing 500 Life Points. This card returns to it's owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card was Summoned. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for every Spellcaster-Type monster you control. This card can attack your opponent (would add)'s Life Points(but not really necessary) directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 with Tinos updated I'll raise the rate to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 good cards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 If this card attacks a monster, the attacked monster is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally.).During each of your Main Phases, you can decrease your Life Points by 700 to inflict 1000 Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. damage is correct. (but that's to old ocg (see Solar Flare Dragon and the others.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 wow the two firsts are wowbut the last the image looks too harmlessrating 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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