Dan.Baker123 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Lock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Ok, lets see Centered focal is bad.The text is unreadableDon't use textThe render is badAll this is, is a background with a render slapped on the top with some text.I didn't see your 1st one, but I'm guessing it's worse.The light source is badNo depthNo flowThe composition is bad.To much black.Try again.Go read some tuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Ok' date=' lets see Centered focal is bad.The text is unreadableDon't use textThe render is badAll this is, is a background with a render slapped on the top with some text.I didn't see your 1st one, but I'm guessing it's worse.The light source is badNo depthNo flowThe composition is bad.To much black.Try again.Go read some tuts.[/quote'] terrible way of cncing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Ok' date=' lets see Centered focal is bad.The text is unreadableDon't use textThe render is badAll this is, is a background with a render slapped on the top with some text.I didn't see your 1st one, but I'm guessing it's worse.The light source is badNo depthNo flowThe composition is bad.To much black.Try again.Go read some tuts.[/quote'] terrible way of cncing. But all correct, regardless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Ok' date=' lets see Centered focal is bad.The text is unreadableDon't use textThe render is badAll this is, is a background with a render slapped on the top with some text.I didn't see your 1st one, but I'm guessing it's worse.The light source is badNo depthNo flowThe composition is bad.To much black.Try again.Go read some tuts.[/quote'] terrible way of cncing. Yeah, no offense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 lol, I didn't even see the text till he pointed it out. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.