KillDrick Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 I need help. I think this is a good idea for a card and i need your guys opinion on it. Feel free to post comments on how to fix the problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 interesting burn effect, you can even destroy it yourself and burn your opponent The picture still looks a bit zombie like though, but the background makes it suitable for LIGHT attribute. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillDrick Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 My bad i ment it to be dark attribute. thanks for pointing that out.Here it is all beter. Any more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Slipstream Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 ....It is OP (overpowering) Since it has to ATK restrictions. If someone plays with 8000 Life Points they can pay 6000 and your dragon will dominate the field. At least restrict it to 3000. OCG Errors:1. "Normal summoned" should be "Normal Summoned"2. "any number of your life points and add it to this monster's attack and defense" should be "any number of your Life Points. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of Life Points paid."3. "When this monster is destroied by card effect" should be "When this card is destroyed by a card's effect"4. "subtract the attack of this monster from your opponents life points." should be "inflict damage equal to this cards ATK to your opponent." It's last effect is again horribly OP. Even with my suggested restriction it would be OP. Have it say "inflict half of this card's attack to your opponent" instead to balance it. The picture doesnt quite fit and I think you should change the attribute to Dark. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillDrick Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Revised from last comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 looks much more balanced out now, pic suits it better, so I'll raise the rate to 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillDrick Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 thanks everyone for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cube563 Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Cool card and better pic, but I didn't really like the effect but I'll give you a solid 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 it cant be normal summoned (i think) it can only be Tribut Summoned check with somone on the spelling (mine not yours) overall its an amazing card 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillDrick Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 well tribute summon is normal summon for a high lvl monster. if im wrong someone correct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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