Pmac Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 This is my second deck, my first was about sonic and didnt receive very good critics. Well, here i am again this time better than beforeThis is a marvel deck if it has good responses i will update him weekly, if not, well... learn from my mistakes. [spoiler=Spiderman & "friends" ] [spoiler=X-Men]PS:i know theres no Scarlet witch but i will make her, i dont have time now. [spoiler=fantastic four] [spoiler= The Avengers] [spoiler=Others] [spoiler= Spell& traps] PS:The images are all from Marvel comics database wiki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Logan's name is James Howlettmake real types and the effects are short and boring please make them longer also OCG errors and bad wording. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 agreed with Shonen Jump™, the ocg needs work, the effects are short and repettive, create realistic types, and finally give iron spider-man an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Sorry, my bad when i said human i meant warrior.I dont know why i write human...and for all of them. Im changing it right now. About Young Logan, i know hes called James, but even then they called him Logan. So i used Logan instead of James Howlett. About the effects, ok i will try. Last deck was almost all of them normal cardsI will correct that in my next update one more thing WTH is OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Bad OCG and bad effect that seems way too random Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bxizawol Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 nice cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 OCG is official card grammer. The cards stink. ReDo most of them. Try to captilize correctly and make some attack and effect changes. the deck would probably work well together. make some spells and traps. Deck:8/10 Cards:3.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 As what has been said earlier, you do need to work on your OCG. Fix that and I think you're good to go. I see some real potential here. Can't wait to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 could you tell me exactly what are the errors so i can change them?Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Oh and some more cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Those are actually a bit better. 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 The last ones from this week added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I'm pretty sure you spelt sabertooth wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I'm pretty sure you spelt sabertooth wrong No, i checked. Its Sabrethoot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 o.0 he is named after a sabertooth tiger!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Well, thats a Marvel mistake not mine.Check it out:http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/80/Sabretooth2.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 since im not going to be here next week, the next week cards are addedin my personal opinion,i think im getting better at this card making thing.Rate and comment please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ive added a couple of cards and modified others. I gathered all of my cards trough out the post and put it all in the first, now organized.Please comment and rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Calvin' pid='2739780' dateline='1249434832']Those are actually a bit better. 6.7/10 Why doncha comment on my Marvel set. BTW 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 first bump in my life.Comment, and comment my Anime deck too (i think the anime one is better though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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