ForestYuGiOh Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 this is another one of my cards. by the way what is OCG?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 name is uncreative It doesn't even follow the ordinary rules a spirit monster is supposed to 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Ocg is "Original Card Grammer" which is something you need to work on. And it's effect is OP'd. Pic could be a bit better too. But since your new i should cut you some slack. 6/10 8/10 if you fix it up a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 OCG Fix: If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard move all Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard to your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. OP, I'd suggest a cost of LP for the drawback. Alright picture but poor background.Low ATK and DEF for a level 7 Card.6/10 Decent try for one of your first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForestYuGiOh Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 name is uncreative It doesn't even follow the ordinary rules a spirit monster is supposed to 4/10 becuase idk what there supposed to do idk crap about yugioh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KuntryBoy Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 terraible card. pic is fake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 name is uncreative It doesn't even follow the ordinary rules a spirit monster is supposed to 4/10 becuase idk what there supposed to do idk crap about yugiohThen why are you here?terraible card. pic is fakeof course the pic is fake almost all the pics on this site are fake did you expect a real dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForestYuGiOh Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 remake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 that's not the color for an effect monster :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 This is honestly terrible. If you need help making cards, go look at other User-Created cards and get some insight from those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JARVISD09 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 the remake is alright, just its effect is written in flavor text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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