Dark Kingdom Deck creator present. (it will be updated)

[SETHRX7]

This is my firs time. Please. Be gentle 8)

 

 

[Slash]

there are some grammer mistakes, but they're good for your first ones 7/10

[SETHRX7]

Thanks for rating 8). I’m planning posted here my new cards. My Dark Kingdom Deck must be done!!! Mwahahahahaha!!! (Sorry for that. I can’t resist 8))

[SETHRX7]

As I said as I did. This is my next card.

 

[SETHRX7]

Next two cards. Please rate all 3 cards.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with Ritual Spell Card, "Pandrimia's Escape". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 12 or more as a Tribute from the field or hand. This card can't be destroyed by any of traps and spell card. When this monster send another monster to Graveyard, owner of this card earn 500 Life Points. This monster can't attack Directly.

[Unskilled]

The cards are ok...The OCG needs improvement

 

Pandrimia is very over powered..Invincible to spell, trap and on field battle (with 4500, there aren't many cards around to be able to destroy it)

 

Although its drawback is it can't attack directly, It wouldn't make much different..I'm assuming this card can be destroyed by monster effects though?

 

The magic card duel is very confusing, and could be fairly pointless in battle..

 

The first two cards are fine..Balanced and quite unique..However your new cards are a bit poor.

 

3/10...Sorry

[SETHRX7]

...Sorry

It’s Ok. :)

Pandrimia - Mother Of The End

This card is powerful' date=' but even a monster like a Man-Eater Bug or Penguin Soldier can destroy it. In my opinion it is balanced monster.

 

[b']Duel[/b]

I must admit, that card is one of my firs projects (I create this card few years ago 8)). I just can’t resist of recreate those 8).

[Balvarine]

Needs grammar improvment.:

But I really like your cards!!!!:):):)

Maybe you should lower ATK of Pandrimia by 500 and its def by 100-200.

You have great names and pics.

I like the Duel most----> For duel you should have;

 

As long as this card is face-up on the field,during your or your opponent's Battle Phase,when your opponent has face-up monster on his side of the field that has the same ATK as your face-up Attack Position monster(and vice-versa),those monster must battle each other and their battle must be first.The monster which has less ATK in the next 2 turns is destroyed.The Trap Cards cannot affect the increasing or decreasing ATK of those monsters.After your monster destroyes your opponent's monster,inflict Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the half of the monster's ATK and vice-versa.

 

There,:D I might improved it a bit.

 

 

9.2/10 for all.

Great job for a new member(I do not underrastimmate you,I'm just exposing the facts...)

Thans,I learned something from those cards!!!:D

8)

[Leturn Master]

grammar isnt so good. Cyber Lady's defense card isnt worded so well. Duel is a hard card to use... But the name Pandrima made up for it all. :D. Pandrima's escape is my favorite card & pandrima - mother of destruction is such a cool name anyway. problem is that the pic doesn't suit it too well. Keep going tho'! 6.4/10

[Unskilled]

...Sorry

It’s Ok. :)

Pandrimia - Mother Of The End

This card is powerful' date=' but even a monster like a Man-Eater Bug or Penguin Soldier can destroy it. In my opinion it is balanced monster.

 

[b']Duel[/b]

I must admit, that card is one of my firs projects (I create this card few years ago 8)). I just can’t resist of recreate those 8).

 

Unfortunately I must disagree about Pandrimia being balanced (we all have different opinions) this card can only be destroyed by one factor of a very big game..Effect cards is the only way out of that monsters destruction..It needs more weakness to make it balanced...In my real deck, I only have two cards in my deck that can stop it...And there's a small chance of drawing them and a big chance of me using them earlier in the duel..

 

Spells, traps, ATK and effects..Out of the four ways to destroy a monster, effect is the only significant one..Of course if I brought on BEUD and increased its attack power with an equip spell, I might have a shot...But my BEUD would still be open to damage from spells, traps and effects whereas your monster wouldn't..Do you see how unbalanced that is? I can't even bring out BEUD with confidence to destroy your monster. When your opponent is relying on only one factor of this game, you know you've got a broken card in your deck.

 

But still, it doesn't matter. As long as your happy with them, I was only giving you my honest opinion :)

[Tekken Ham]

I agree with unskilled it rly is overpowered, its vulnerability to monster effects and battle but nothing else along with its ATK is rly broken, it cant attack directly but u can always use scapegoat and creature swap also most of ur cards need their grammar fixed. 5/10 srry also i kno how to defeat BEUD AND Pandrima XD Amazon warrior lady+Injection Fairy Lily+ Megamorph on enemy monster lol High ATK powers will be ur downfall!!! MUWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

[SETHRX7]

Thanks people. I still learning, so in the future it will be better (with grammar too). Your opinions (this more and less positive) is good form me. Thanks one more time 8). My Dark Kingdom Deck still need minimum another 35 cards.

[keji masters]

nice cards but some are overpowerd 5/10

[SETHRX7]

New Cards. Please rate.

 

[Tekken Ham]

Bad grammar and OCG again and most are overpowered... 4/10 Uriana's effect is a hypocrite too...

[Azuh]

Ok Cards... try reading real cards to get the feel of the card grammar

 

6/10

[SETHRX7]

Ehh… I’m using MSWord and still was some mistakes (I’m still learning). Could someone help and tell me, where I do those mistakes?

 

EDIT:

And one more thing. When I trying create some cards, I use hints from game Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Duel Academy.

[The Dark Master]

nice cards...most are overpowered, but dont feel bad about it, most cards made are ovapowered...so pretty good =P 7/10

[SETHRX7]

I have talent to do some overpowered cards, so I done another one.:D

 

 

Please, rate this card.

[God GAK]

It's not overpowered. it is the same as limiter removal but for spellcasters

[Junk Raver]

Picture on your new card could be improved

 

Some grammar errors

 

and what Gak said.

[SETHRX7]

Next card. Please rate.

 

 

One more thing. If there are some grammar mistakes, please tell me, where they are.

[Junk Raver]

spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, OCG errors.

 

Unfortunatly i dont have time, right now, to point them out (but maybe can later)

 

oh and the writing in the picture needs removing to.

[Yankee]

DJ got it AGAIN, lol

Yeah, listen to DJ osiris. XD

[.:/Jishin//Enigma/:.]

you DO NOT cap Of and The