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[Biscuit680]

View My Booster Pack.if you DO NOT like them,just say 'I Don't Like Them' Please.

THANK YOU

[Starly_64]

If you want some constructive criticism and how you can make these cards even better, I won't just say "I don't like them". Anyway:

 

Image need more work. Quick, MS Paint-like drawings, and no background.

Exactly why do they have the type "SquareHead". What does it do? What's it's purpose? It would be more logical if their names had "Squarehead" in them, so when you refer to them in an effect, it can say "Squarehead" monster.

"Fusey's Fuse" OCG is not so good.

Fixed: "Once per Turn, you can Tribute 2 "Square-Head" Fusion-Material Monsters you control, and Fusion Summon 1 monster with the Tributed monsters listed. While a "Square-Head" monster is on your side of the field, this card cannot be destroyed by a card effect."

 

Overall, I do not like them. 2/10.

[Starly_64]

Carry On If You Want To Get Reported Starly.I Don't Care!

 

I won't get reported for having an opinion.

[Kitty]

Starly is right u kno.. the pics could use some creativity... and the cards aren't that great.. 4/10

[WTF]

bad

 

2/10

[Sploda]

I agree with starly you could do better with the pics 3.9/10

[DeathSDelano]

bad cards 3/10

 

reasons:

on the vanillas: the lore is not good at all give it more spice

 

on roundhead pac: -.- you can only have 3 of the same card in your deck so how are you going get him out if he requires 4 of the same card

 

pics are meh if this is paint but pics can be better even if using paint

 

king squarehead: if a card has ? for ATK or DEF it needs to have an effect that tells you how the card gets its attack

[Biscuit680]

bad cards 3/10

 

reasons:

on the vanillas: the lore is not good at all give it more spice

 

on roundhead pac: -.- you can only have 3 of the same card in your deck so how are you going get him out if he requires 4 of the same card-(secret card i didn't add-teeheehee!)

 

pics are meh if this is paint but pics can be better even if using paint

 

king squarehead: if a card has ? for ATK or DEF it needs to have an effect that tells you how the card gets its attack

[Starly_64]

This is a response to your private message, since I cannot post messages to you:

 

What are you talking about? Are you talking about a post I made months ago? I do not see how I have done something bad. You can clearly see that everyone else in this thread agrees with me on what could need improving. Besides, I never said anything offensive, such as "Your cards suck!" or "Never make cards again!" What I was trying to do was to tell you how you can make your cards even better.

 

If you do not want constructive criticism, then do not post your cards on here, or else you will never know how you can improve your cards. I believe that it is better to have constructive criticism than to receive only positive feedback, because you will learn from your mistakes.

 

If I emotionally hurt you in any way with my comment, then I apologize, but I think the rest of the users in this thread would agree with me when I say that all I was trying to do was to help you. I have treated many users the same way, and they have thanked me for pointing out flaws that they were fine to get rid of. Even the new users are not so bad-tempered.