The Dark Citadel,Seregis the Endbringer and Ravenous Ghoul[VFTD]

[Rhollu]

Effect:

During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, put 1 Armageddon Counter on this card. When there are 5 or more Armageddon Counters on this card, you can remove all Armageddon counters and send 3 Zombie-type monsters from your field to the Graveyard and Special Summon "Allyssia,Duchess of the Dark Citadel" from your Hand or Deck. When there are 10 or more Armageddon counters on this card and "Allyssia,Duchess of the Dark Citadel" is on the field,you can send this card and "Allyssia,Duchess of the Dark Citadel" to the Graveyard to Special Summon "Seregis the Endbringer" from your Deck or Hand.

 

Effect:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned and Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Dark Citadel. When this card is on the field,the ATK and DEF of all the monsters except for this card is halved. You can remove from play 1 Zombie-type monster on your field to negate the activation of a card controlled by your opponent. When this card attacks your opponent directly, you win the game.

 

[WTF]

OCG is superb

 

no vanillas (meaning no normal monsters)

 

balanced

 

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

only the last card needs an effect

 

for Seregies, I don't know why you'd have it remove zombie monsters if yours is a warrior type

 

8/10

[iSTIX]

You forgot to capitalize Field, but the cards are still good:)

[Big Lez]

 

Nice work, for a beginner

8.7/10