Another random idea

[Bringerofcake]

I seem to be having an awful lot of these lately.

 

Hivemind Dragon

DARK

Dragon/Synchro

9/2400/2400

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If a card effect would remove this monster from the field, you can Tribute a "Hivemind Slave" you control to negate the effect of the card and destroy it. When this card battles a monster you can take control of it with this card's effect. Its name is treated as "Hivemind Slave" and it gains the following effect:

• If you control no "Hivemind" monsters besides "Hivemind Slave", destroy this card.

 

I'll probably make this into an Archetype, but for now, what do you think?

[Guest duducukier]

go to the threat dual and play along and i will give you 5 points

[Caeel]

BringerofCake: This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card.When this card battles a monster, you can take control of it with this card's effect. Its name is also treated as "Hivemind Slave" and it gains this effect: "If you control no "Hivemind" monsters besides "Hivemind Slave", destroy this card." If a card effect would remove this monster from the field, you can Tribute a "Hivemind" monster to negate the activation and effect of the card and destroy it.

 

Should Be:

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. When this card battles a monster you can take control of it with this card's effect. Its name is treated as "Hivemind Slave" and it gains the following effect:

• If you control no "Hivemind" monsters besides "Hivemind Slave, destroy this card. If a card effect would remove this monster from the field, you can Tribute a "Hivemind" monster on your side of the field to negate the effect of the card and destroy it.

 

 

And duducukier: Stop asking people to duel.

[玄魔の王]

BringerofCake: This card cannot be destroyed by battle' date=' and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card.When this card battles a monster, you can take control of it with this card's effect. Its name is also treated as "Hivemind Slave" and it gains this effect: "If you control no "Hivemind" monsters besides "Hivemind Slave", destroy this card." If a card effect would remove this monster from the field, you can Tribute a "Hivemind" monster to negate the activation and effect of the card and destroy it.

 

Should Be:

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. When this card battles a monster you can take control of it with this card's effect. Its name is treated as "Hivemind Slave" and it gains the following effect:

• If you control no "Hivemind" monsters besides "Hivemind Slave, destroy this card. If a card effect would remove this monster from the field, you can Tribute a "Hivemind" monster on your side of the field to negate the effect of the card and destroy it.

 

 

And duducukier: Stop asking people to duel.

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Actually man, Armor master uses the first line of his lore.What I wanna know is: Where are the Material Listings?

[Bringerofcake]

...oh damn. I knew I was forgetting something. I had this already typed, but my trackpad screwed up and I shot over to the back button instead... I'll make those changes (I was channeling MTG for the effect) and I'll put up the requirements, although there aren't any specific ones. As for the card itself?

[dimitri]

a question, the effect of taking your opponents monster is it only once as its on the field or each time its battle

other than the questin, i would love to see it as an card

8,5/10

[Bringerofcake]

Dimitri: Each battle.

Gave it some stats, and changed the effect around a little.

[dimitri]

okey nowing that i rate to 9/10

[danilyu]

I seem to be having an awful lot of these lately.

 

Hivemind Dragon

DARK

Dragon/Synchro/Effect

9/2400/2400

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card cannot be destroyed by battle' date=' and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If a card effect would remove this monster from the field, you can Tribute a "Hivemind Slave" you control to negate the effect of the card and destroy it. When this card battles a monster[b'],[/b] you can take control of it with this card's effect. That monster's name is treated as "Hivemind Slave" and it gains the following effect:

• If you control no "Hivemind" monsters besides "Hivemind Slave", destroy this card.

 

I'll probably make this into an Archetype, but for now, what do you think?

Made some small changes (they are bolded). By the way, the monster that you take control of has its name treated as "Hivemind Slave" permanently or while Hivemind Dragon is on the field?

 

Anyways, looks really good. 9.5/10

[Bringerofcake]

I operate under the assumption that unless there is flavor text, all of my monsters are effect monsters. Thus, no effect title.

The other change is minor, and the slaves die if HMD isn't on the field, and the name change doesn't extend to the Graveyard.