My Ideas

[Wscheben]

Ok ok, so I have all these ideas run through my head whenever I log on, so I figure, if I create one card that seems semi-realistic every time I visit and then update this post, all have good input from other users and I will find out what's good and what's crap. Well I may be biased into thinking they are all good ...er... decent, BUT you be the judge.

 

Any input is appreciated!!

 

~Wolfgang

 

 

 

[align=center]Card One Is!

Effect:

You may only activate this card's effect once per turn. To activate this card's effect discard from your hand any card that would special summon tokens. Special summon a "Toy Token" (Warrior-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) for every token that would be special summoned by the effect of the card discarded.[/align]

 

Originally with this card I wanted to make it an Elf. Like from the North Pole and stuff. Anyways i think th

is would be a good card for Scapegoats or traps the summon tokens. I use goats as an example because they have no attack or defense and they cannot be used for a tribute. The toy Tokens can!!! Good Tuner fodder too!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[align=center]Card Two!!!

 

I just wanted to continue the Luster Dragon Vanillas! =][/align]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[align=center]Card Three is...

Effect:When this card is used in a Synchro summon the other Synchro materials must be Dragon-type monsters also. When this card is used in a Synchro Summon it's becomes a level 5 monster.[/align]

 

I thought it was random but a good idea. maybe better idea for othe Sychro type monster but i really like Dragons. =]

 

 

 

[align=center]Card Four!

Effect:

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is would be destroyed by a spell or trap card remove this card from play and special summon this card during the end phase of your next turn. When this card is removed from play, each monster on your side of the field gains 500 ATK. When this card is special summoned, each monster on your side of the field loses 500 ATK.[/align]

 

Effects kinda long and its almost OP'd in my opinion but i run decks with A Hero Emerges a lot of the times. If i made him a Zombie-Type would that be better? Call of the Mummy!!!!!!!!

[ragnarok1945]

I guess the picture fits, still wish you had a better one though

 

Basically what you're saying in the effect is once per turn, discard a number of cards, special summon the same number of toy tokens as the number of cards you discarded.

 

It's quite an impressive effect, but maybe put some drawbacks to it, the effect is too powerful since you didn't say what the tokens can or can't do, so that means it can attack and be used for both tribute and synchro summons

 

7/10

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

i think its just cards that also summon tokens..

like scapegoat?

makes it bland.....

becos why would you run it to summon tokens from cards that ALREADY summon tokens.

i'd reword the effect slightly. otherwise, not too bad an effort.

6.5/10

[Lord Ursus]

This is actually not bad. :)

 

OCG fix:

Your OCG: You may only activate this card's effect once per turn. To activate this card's effect discard from your hand any card that would special summon tokens. Special summon a "Toy Token" (Warrior-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) for every token that would be special summoned by the effect of the card discarded.

 

Correct OCG: Once per turn, you can discard cards from your hand that could Summon Tokens. Special Summon a "Toy Token" (Warrior-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) for each Token the discarded card(s) could Summon.

 

This card is actually very powerful. It sneaks around the drawbacks of Scapegoat and that other goat thingie. (Can't remember the name) And gives you very many monsters, ready for tribute summoning monsters that requires a lot of tributes.

 

You just need a better image for this card and it's ready to go.

 

I like it. :D

 

G. Fix and you will get O.

[gunggang777]

The effect is rather Bad and NOT really needed

and the pic is TERIBBLE

but it's not overpowered

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[General Assclown]

i think its just cards that also summon tokens..

like scapegoat?

makes it bland.....

becos why would you run it to summon tokens from cards that ALREADY summon tokens.

i'd reword the effect slightly. otherwise' date=' not too bad an effort.

6.5/10

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^^ You said it for me XD

 

I don't really "admire" the picture, it's really.......meh.

 

Effect seems pointless, to get rid of Token Summoning cards to summon Tokens.

 

Also, give the Toy Tokens an effect, otherwise they're weak <>.

 

6 / 10

[Wscheben]

I would have to agree that I need a better Picture.

 

Ƨőųł~ɸ~Ƒĭɍҿ: Thanks for understanding what i was going for and helping with the OCG! =] Im working on another card right now. I hope you will check it out and give your opinions.

 

Actually,

 

I want everyone to judge my cards. I like Honesty,

 

 

Thanks for the critiques!

 

~Wolfgang