Ģค๓blє Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 [align=center]You easily fall asleep after a long day of work, fun, and anything else really... You begin to dream, the sign of a good nights sleep. You dream of many different characters, some are not clear to you, but they seem to make things move and stop things from moving. They are constantly dancing around in your dreams. But, why? You wake up... But it seems you still see the characters! What's happening? One character, a woman answers, "Only in Your Dreams" Than slowly fades away, with the other characters. Welcome to, the Dream World [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned, activate 1 of the following effects- As long as this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent cannot activate and Spell or Trap cards.- As long as this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent cannot take cards out of their Graveyard, or activate the effect of any cards in their Graveyard. [spoiler=Lore]As long as this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent's monsters cannot change their battle positions except by the effect of a Monster, Spell, or Trap card. [spoiler=Lore]As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, the effects of your opponent's cards does not affect any cards in their Graveyard and they cannot activate the effects of cards in their Graveyard. [spoiler=Lore]As long as this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent cannot Special Summon (This includes Ritual Summoning, Fusion Summoning, and Synchro Summoning). [spoiler=Lore]As long as this card remains face-up on your field your opponent's monsters cannot change their battle positions. Thanks everybody for looking ^_^ I think that may be one of my most creative starting stories LOL Well, I really wanted to introduce a new theme to Yu-Gi-Oh! I thought that trying to lock your opponent's field is new. Trying to make sure they cannot use anything anymore.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 The 1st one, change "choose 1 of the following effects and activate it" to "activate 1 of the following effects".The 2nd one - your field to your side of the field.The 3rd one I think ur mixing up effect for affect* their graveyard. Change it to "As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, the effects of your opponent's cards does not affect any cards in their Graveyard".The 4th one : Your side - your side of the field May not - cannot Special Summon any monsters.The 5th one : your field - your side of the field. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks, it's just. I read the Grammar before and your field can = your side of the field Thanks for the Grave thing though, when I first made it I had that. Than I accidentally forgot to save and my brain messed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 love them...10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks! Expect more soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Cool, but... battle position=Battle PositionTrap card=Trap Card I'll give it a full review. Pictures: 7/10 Some pictures weren't good at all, some were average.OCG: 8/10 Your OCG is pretty good putting beside what I said above.Effects: 9/10 Some could be a little less simple, but very good. Overall: 8/10 I want to see more, and not just Dream Conquerors! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Parees' effect is a little WAY too bland, the rest all look perfect though 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks. I really couldn't think of how to spice up Parees' effect. I'll find a way somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Parees' effect is to simple. he pics are pretty good. And Skippy_Canoe already pointed out the OCG. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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