ReconAssassin Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 do you like rate and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JrockerAngel7 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 needs to be an effect monster, :Pbut that aside nice pic and effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 dont put random numbers into fields you dont understand.also, either make it effect, or change the flavor text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReconAssassin Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 i updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Not really feeling the pic, it doesn't really match the card name. I see nothing "Armageddon" about a phoenix bursting out of mud. Your OCG is close, but it could use some tweaking: "When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 1000." For 2500 ATK, I would think it would need 2 Tributes (7 stars and up) to Summon...The effect is kind of basic, but not a bad start. Up the Level to 7 or higher and its still pretty balanced. Not a bad start, now work on making more creative effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Too bland of an effect for lv6, give it another one and it'll be much better 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReconAssassin Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Not really feeling the pic' date=' it doesn't really match the card name. I see nothing "Armageddon" about a phoenix bursting out of mud. Your OCG is close, but it could use some tweaking: "When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 1000." For 2500 ATK, I would think it would need 2 Tributes (7 stars and up) to Summon...The effect is kind of basic, but not a bad start. Up the Level to 7 or higher and its still pretty balanced. Not a bad start, now work on making more creative effects.[/quote'] its not mud, dont u see the hands from the underworld and firethanx for comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kronikman Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 yea fix ur ocg a bit. and like he said make it a level 7. i dont understand why every effect has to have 10000+ words in order not to make it bland. fix a few things and its definitely a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 short of an effect maybe if it was a lv 4 it would be good7/10until i see changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kvin146 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I agree need to see some change Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antist0opid Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I honestly think the card is good as it is. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swimmer117 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 nice card. change the name though9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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