Salty911 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 [/img] [/img] Pm me if you cant read effects you should be able to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Motar: Pic: is grainy. I suggest you find a better one. OCG:"During each of your Standby Phases, while you control this card, or it is in your Graveyard, you can put 1 Dark Shroud Counter on a face up LIGHT monster on your opponent's field. Increase the ATK and DEF of any DARK monster that battles a monster with a Dark Shroud Counter on it." *oh, and its Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast. **Which I might add, I think this would serve better as a Spellcaster or a Fiend...possibly a Warrior. Point being, it doesn't look like a "Beast" to me. Some decent DARK support. Light's Protector: Pic: Still a little grainy and black and white. Have you tried deviantart.com? OCG: See Motar. I see what you were going for with the effects, but it seems kind of boring the second time I read it. :/Instead of making it an exact clone effect-wise, why not make something that is similar, but unique in its own way? And I'm sure you can come up with a better name than "Light's Protector". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The7thSorrow Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 OCG needs major help and pics could be better. I really like these effects tho, i recommend looking at the OCG help thread. my attempt to help: Once per turn during your Standby Phase, put 1 Dark Shroud Counter on a face-up DARK Monster you control. When a Monster with a Dark Shroud Counter on it battles a LIGHT Monster, it gains 400 ATK and DEF. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, put 1 Light Shroud Counter on a face-up LIGHT Monster you control. When a Monster with a Light Shroud Counter on it battles a DARK Monster, it gains 400 ATK and DEF. EDIT: OMGAKITTY you beat me! Now I feel sad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 pics are both blurry and the 2nd one needs some color. The effects are relatively balanced out, but the OCG is off 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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