Kierantoocool Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Hello, I have just joined this cool site and I've already made 1 card, please tell me what you think :D [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFlaherty13 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 im gonna help you out here, people on this site dont like Normal Monsters(Vinallas), you need to use real types to be taken seriously, like Warrior, Fiend, Ect. Good idea for the card, make it have an effect and youll be in buisness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 im gonna help you out here' date=' people on this site dont like Normal Monsters(Vinallas), you need to use real types to be taken seriously, like Warrior, Fiend, Ect. Good idea for the card, make it have an effect and youll be in buisness[/quote'] Oh, okay, got it, affect monsters and proper types, thanks for the advice :POkay, I've added an affect and changed him to a warrior :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFlaherty13 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Read the OCG forum, it tells you basic card sturcture, simple mistakes, and tricks and tools to improve cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 nice card for a beginner 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Read the OCG forum' date=' it tells you basic card sturcture, simple mistakes, and tricks and tools to improve cards[/quote']Okay, will do :D cheers for the help again nice card for a beginner 8/10 thanks :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 8.5/10 great for starters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 8.5/10 great for starters Thank You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Lol, that's funny.1: Your OCG could use work. Check out some real cards for work.2: The effect is nice, the card isn't OPd at all.3: 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaman0320 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 [image: Hellsing__Alu_by_Nataly_G-1.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 i like the effect. but being a level 6 you might want to change the DEF to 2400. the pic is awsome. great first card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Lol' date=' that's funny.1: Your OCG could use work. Check out some real cards for work.2: The effect is nice, the card isn't OPd at all.3: 7.8/10[/color']thanks for the advice i like the effect. but being a level 6 you might want to change the DEF to 2400. the pic is awsome. great first card. 8/10 cheers ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Hello' date=' I have just joined this cool site and I've already made 1 card, please tell me what you think :D [img'][/img] Looks good pal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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