.King Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 What's up people of YCM? I'm new here, and this is my first card. It's a Fairy-Type monster, unless you think it should be a Warrior. Here's some things you should know about the card: 1. It's my first card (obviously)2. "Mitsukai" means Angel in Japanese (I think)3. You need to discard 2 LIGHT monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to Summon it. The thing is, you should discard 2 STRONG LIGHT monsters, because when Mitsukai is destroyed, you can Special SUmmon 1 of those 2 monsters That's about it. Please Rate and Comment. And if you find something wrong, whether it's the OCG, or the picture, I don't know, please leave your complaint in your comment, and if I find it suits, then I'll change it. Now, with out further ado, my "Angel Warrior Mitsukai!" (I made a Holo for it too) [align=center]Angel Warrior MitsukaiVersion 1Version 2[/align] [spoiler=Lore (They're both the same)]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 LIGHT monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 of the 2 discarded cards to your side of the field, in face-up Attack Position. [spoiler=Credits]1. Image Credit goes to wanderley2. Holo Credit goes to Skippy_Canoe for his GIMP GFX Tutorial Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 version 1 is less blurry, so go with that one can you write out the lore for it too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 This might be one of the best F***ing cards I've ever seen. I applaud your work with a standing ovation. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 @ragnarok1945 - Sh*t! I was gonna put it, but I was probably too excited and forgot to put it. I'll be sure to put it up. Thanks! :)@.:JBM:. - Thanks, man! I'll be sure to check out some of your work too! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 it was hard to see, you get 10/10 for the picture itself, but I want the lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Roman Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 I kind of like the 2nd version and I think is A little to Powerfull for the conditions to be summoned, maby you can change it to discard 3 light monster instead or lower his ATK to 2700 points or 2600 maby , but thats my oppinion...my rate9/10 +1.7bonus(For being a new member as me) = 10.7/10 Great job! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 @.:JBM:. - Thanks' date=' man! I'll be sure to check out some of your work too! :D[/quote'] No problem, though my good work, I enter in contests only. I'll PM you some if ya like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 @ragnarok1945 - I got it up. :)@Kevin Roman - Nice to see another New Member! Thanks for checking out my card! :)@.:JBM:. - Thanks' date=' man! I'll be sure to check out some of your work too! :D[/quote'] No problem, though my good work, I enter in contests only. I'll PM you some if ya like. KK. Thanks! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 the effect is a bit too bland, that only gets 8.8/10, so overall you get 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 it was hard to see' date=' you get 10/10 for the picture itself, but I want the lore.[/quote'] He already posted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Sure, Mitsukai means angel, but Tenshi is much more common and much more fitting IMO. I think it's a bit strong, maybe lower the ATK by 100 points or so. Its effect is great, and you deserve applaud for the great picture (if it could be less blurred), and the awesome holo effect. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks everybody! I'll get crackin' on making, and rating some new cards! :D EDIT: Thanks Ixigo, and I new that Tenshi also meant Angel, but I didn't know Tenshi was more common. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 it was hard to see' date=' you get 10/10 for the picture itself, but I want the lore.[/quote'] He already posted it. yeah well that was AFTER I wrote the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 it was hard to see' date=' you get 10/10 for the picture itself, but I want the lore.[/quote'] He already posted it. yeah well that was AFTER I wrote the post. Perhaps. *Licks lips seducingly* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 anyways, will you make a support card for this or something later? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 anyways' date=' will you make a support card for this or something later?[/quote'] I hope he will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Its an outstanding debut card to our little cardmaking community. I would rep you for it, but I've already maxed out today XD I do love to see a new member that can use proper grammar (inside the card as well as without). The effect itself however, as Rag has mentioned, is a little bland. But a good start! Now work on expanding from this to more creative effects. ;)I think you'll do well here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks again to everybody! I can't believe how popular this card got! @ragnarok1945 and .:JBM:. - Perhaps later, because I have already made another card, and will post it soon! :)@OMGAKITTY - Thank you for a warm welcome and an awesome rate! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick2496~ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 haha It sounds almost as the name of one of my cards.But it is totally different in all the other ways.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks nick! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick2496~ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 you are welcome buddy. I can't wait to see your next card.When you post it or create it let me see it. maybe some day we can create a set XP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks again to everybody! I can't believe how popular this card got! @ragnarok1945 and .:JBM:. - Perhaps later' date=' because I have already made another card, and will post it soon! :)@OMGAKITTY - Thank you for a warm welcome and an awesome rate! :D[/quote'] good, I'll keep checking here if you intend to put supports here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 you are welcome buddy. I can't wait to see your next card.When you post it or create it let me see it. maybe some day we can create a set XP. Sure, why not with the set thing? And my card is already up lol. :lol: EDIT: Every time I reply to my own thread, ragnarok posts before me. XP Thanks, and I don't know whether I'll put it here, or in another thread topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 version 1 is less blurry' date=' so go with that one can you write out the lore for it too?[/quote'] I've noticed that most of the time when a card is HOLO'D you say its Blurry 0.0Well I like the effect, It's a bit Simple but it gets the Job done,Good OCG, Wanderley's pic is good lol9.5/10 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.King Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Thanks Namo. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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