Phoenix-Wing Archetype Set PLZ RATE/COMMENT

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I DO NOT CLAIM OWNERSHIP OF ANY OF THE ARTWORK DISPLAYED HERE. ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE ARTIST AT DEVIANTART THAT IS SAID ON EACH OF THE CARDS.

 

Now than, my newest set was inspired by hours of staring at the Blackwing set and then improvising a name. I may add more if time permits and I hope to get as many comments as possible. Any criticism is welcomed, I'm not a master at OCG and still looking to improve.

 

Lore for Black Phoenix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 DARK "Phoenix-Wing" monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, place 1 Phoenix counter on this card (max 6). During your Battle Phase if there are 6 Phoenix counters on this card, you can remove all Phoenix counters from the field to have this card attack your opponent directly OR Special Summon 1 Level 8 or higher "Phoenix-Wing" monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack or Defense Position.

Lore for Golden Chaos Dragon: This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Level 8 or higher monsters and 1 "Phoenix-Wing" monster you control. This card is not destroyed by battle with an Effect Monster (Damage Calculation is reduced to 0). As long as you control this face-up card, you take no Battle Damage from a battle involving a Normal Monster. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can discard up to 4 Spell or Trap Cards from your hand to the Graveyard, to Special Summon "Chaos Tokens" equal to the amount of Spell or Trap Cards discarded (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1000/DEF 1000). Tokens cannot be used as a Tribute for a Normal Summon or Set. Destroy up to 8 "Chaos Tokens" during your Battle Phase to have this card gain ATK equal to the amount of "Chaos Tokens" destroyed x 1000 until the End Phase.

Lore for Punishment Enforcer: 1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner EARTH monsters

This card cannot be Summoned except by Synchro Summon. This card is treated as a Normal Synchro Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can pay 1500 Life Points to Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Synchro Effect Monster with this effect.

- This card can attack up to 3 times during the same Battle Phase. This card cannot attack directly. Each time this card attacks more than once, place 1 Earth counter on this card. When the number of Earth counters on this card is 6, this card is destroyed.

Lore for Rainbow Phoenix: "Phoenix-Wing Eternal Phoenix" + "Phoenix-Wing Rainbow Angel"

This card cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, equip the destroyed monster to a face-up monster you control as an Equip Spell Card (excluding this card). As long as you control a monster that is equipped with an Equip Spell Card, this card cannot be destroyed (Damage Calculation involving this card is negated). Increase the ATK of monsters equipped with Equip Spell Cards by this effect by 500.

[sparkrock]

I like them but you should make some more 4 or lower cards and also some more traps

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Thanks sparkrock.

I thought I had enough level 4 tuners and its hard to find images to make traps.

Any other comments? I'm pretty sure I don't have perfect OCG.

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Anybody there?

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BUMP!!!