vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 This is another card I just came up with. Please correct any OCG errors and don't hesitate to criticize. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 "Once per turn, pay 500 Life Points and destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field."i think that's closer to what the proper OCG should bei really like this card, very simple but powerful effect9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Thank you very much, I will edit it when I get a chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 im thinking it should be'Once per turn, pay 500 lifepoints to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field'. im not sure but seems to make more sense i think.i like the card though.very nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThecrowcardMaster Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 its good you should at lest make it have 3000 but other than that 9.9/10 and original name hard to pronouns but awsome 11/10 <(For the name) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 i like the card better then the other one you posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Thank you guys, and yes you are right Sephiroth it does make more sense, I changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 too bland and uncreative of an effect, give it another one 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 How about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 now it's far better off, so I'll raise the rate to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Thanks a lot. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Effect is a little simple. Pic is pretty good and without the OCG fixes, the OCG isn't brilliant.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Could you point out what i did wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 The pic is good. the OCG seems okay. The effect is good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Thanks a lot Darkstar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HIPO Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 card is good(not special) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Artwork is okay.OCG is okay,but it should go "you can pay 500...." instead of "pay 500...".Effect is nice and strong.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 This is a REALLY good card. 1000/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Thank you everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Actually, I cant see any OCG errors. Good effect too. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Yeah I try my best on the OCG. Thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I think this card deserves a thumbs up 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vadim26 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Thanks a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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