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I like the holo....but the borders are still visible.

 

OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 "Death Knight" monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field, you can Special Summon 1 Lever 4 or lower "Death Knight" monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.

 

Overall, well done! Some OCG errors, and the effect is kind of overpowered (ease to Summon), but this is an excellent card. :)

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:lol: :lol: :lol:

You make me laugh!!!

EDIT: Does anyone have any advise for these cards???

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[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be equipped to a Dragon-type monster. As long as the equipped monster is equipped to this card it cannot be destroyed by battle. (Battle Damage is applied normally.)

 

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[spoiler=Lore]All Dragon-type monsters you control gain 300 ATK for every Dragon-type monster on the field and in your Graveyard.

 

 

 

I know I messed up with the names, I just want your opinion on them!!!

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Max why do you think I'm pushing my luck by challenging you???

 

Because I have yet to lose a non-contest one-on-one.

 

 

kool and do you guys have anymore ideas for my gods or blood

 

Post what you've got so far here and we can see what you've done.

 

 

max u know how u come up with those names do u just know them or do u look them up

 

Online translation dictionaries. Also I studied Latin and Spanish at school.

 

 

Hey guys' date=' how you all like my new Avi?

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Just...disturbing. And not really 'you'; if you know what I mean. I preferred your old one.

 

 

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Umm i dont know if im a member yet but if i am than um can u guys please comment and rate.

 

You are a member' date=' someone accepted you, I might just not have put you on the list due to lack of time.

 

First of all, why is there 'Holo' in the name? Also, Sweet Lightning's right, you can see the white border. Now that might be a bad holo, but it still detracts from the card.

 

OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 "Death Knight" monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Death Knight" monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position.

 

[i']EDIT: Have just read Sweet Lightning's OCG fix.[/i]

 

 

 

@ Chaos: I'll put it in.

 

 

 

:lol: :lol: :lol:

You make me laugh!!!

EDIT: Does anyone have any advise for these cards???

[spoiler=The cards]285869n.jpg

[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be equipped to a Dragon-type monster. As long as the equipped monster is equipped to this card it cannot be destroyed by battle. (Battle Damage is applied normally.)

 

285869w.jpg

[spoiler=Lore]All Dragon-type monsters you control gain 300 ATK for every Dragon-type monster on the field and in your Graveyard.

 

 

 

I know I messed up with the names' date=' I just want your opinion on them!!!

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Card 1:

Equip only to a Dragon-Type monster. The equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)

 

Fine, just a little dull. A dragon specific version of Mist Body.

 

Card 2:

All Dragon-Type monsters you control gain 300 ATK for each Dragon-Type monster on the field.

 

Adding in the Graveyard could be overpowered considering the number of tribute Dragons.

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i use a translation dictionary that we used once in spanish but when it translated it says the word in that language writiong not english wrtitng

 

But that's the point.

 

"Dimension Crosser Lyse" and "Kajou Kaibutsu" sound a lot better than 'Dimension Crosser Light' and 'Twisted Monster' which is what they mean in Norwegian and Japanese respectively.

 

Plus, for Spanish, the two n's can be counted as the same. And the Japanese just needs to be romanised.

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Hey Max' date=' your thunder empress has a really funny name, as "Torden" means "Thunder" in norwegian. XD

 

So, how's everything going?

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I choose it for that reason.

 

Am currently taking a break from revision for an exam I have this evening.

 

 

@ Sweeny, I asked about "Ally of Justice Catastor" so I could add this card later:

 

[spoiler=Malevolent Justice Catastor]

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Effect: 1 non-Tuner monster - 1 "Malevolent" Dark Tuner monster

You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by Tributing 1 "Ally of Justice Catastor" you control. If you do, this card is destroyed during your next Standby Phase. If this card attacks a non-DARK Machine-Type monster, destroy that monster at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation) and the destroyed monster's controller takes damage equal to the half the destroyed monster's ATK.

 

 

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Wonderful posts everybody and chaos and striker you are waaay too competitve...i need to have a one on one with someone but not yet...and it should be an overpowered 1on1 7 rounds

1 spell, 1 trap, 1 fusion monster, 1 ritual monster, 1 synchro monster, 1 gemini or effect and 1 monster of you choice... yes.. that is what I should do...

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