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[spoiler=Effect] All players must share their Graveyard. Any cost that would be paid to activate a card effect are paid by all players Lifepoints. When this card is sent to the Graveyard or removed from play your hand or the field, add 1 "Sinestria" to your hand.

 

 

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[spoiler=Effect] Up to 3 times per turn, the controller of this card can treat their opponent's Graveyard as their own. No cards can be removed from play. Any Lifepoints that a player would pay as a cost, their opponent pays instead and they gain half of that amount.

 

 

 

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[spoiler=Effect] All the costs of cards are negated and changed to the following:

If a card(s) would be discarded, you add a card(s) from your Graveyard to your hand. A player that would draw a card as a cost of a card, your opponent draws a card(s) instead. If any player would pay Life Points, that amount is gained instead. If a player would tribute a card on the field by a card cost, Special Summon 1 Monster card from the Graveyard instead. This does not apply if this is the card's effect (i.e. Appropriate, Yubel Terror Incarnate, Morphing Jar, etc).This does not apply for cards whose effects are to inflict or gain Life Points (i.e. Supremacy Berry, Oozaki, Magic Cylinder, etc.).

 

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@ Striker: Since I've almost won my one-on-one with Necro, I suggest you finalise your conditions and prepare your card.

 

@ Whamo: Like I said, I only watch the BBC and subbed anime.

 

Also, I've always believed cards that force both players to manipulate each other's Graveyard is asking for trouble. After all, if someone is playing a Zombie Deck against a Lightsworn, your card could allow revival cards to start targeting the other player's monsters, which is overpowered. "Monster Reborn" was banned for that reason.

 

Then, if your opponent gets rid of your Graveyard-sharing card, even if it's still in your hand(!), you instantly add a second Field Spell to your hand from anywhere(!) that allows you solely to screw with your opponent's Graveyard. "Dark Armed Dragon"; with "Sinestria" in play could RFP your opponent's monsters in their Graveyard to destroy the ones they have on the field. Or alternatively, don't have 5 DARK monsters in your Graveyard, but your opponent does? Use "Sinestria" and you can Summon "The Dark Creator".

 

Not to mention that along with messing with your opponent's Graveyard, if you have to pay costs, your opponent pays them(!) and then you regain half the cost(!). So if you have 1000 LP and your opponent 6000, and you activate "Solemn Judgement", they pay 3000 LP and you regain 1500, putting the levels at 2500 to 3000. "Wall of Revealing Light" when you have 5500 LP and your opponent has 8000. Choose to pay 5000 LP, your opponent goes down to 3000 and you go back up to 8000. One final point is that it can be added and activated normally, it doesn't need "Desperate Union" (compare "Mask of Remnants"). It's irrevocably broken.

 

The last card is a good idea, but ruined by it's own complexity. It is just too complicated to be workable. What would be better would be a series of Monster, Spell and Trap cards that all have snipits of the whole effect, linked under an archetype. Also, you never quote cards in effects as examples.

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The last card is a good idea' date=' but ruined by it's own complexity. It is just too complicated to be workable. What would be better would be a series of Monster, Spell and Trap cards that all have snipits of the whole effect, linked under an archetype. Also, you never quote cards in effects as examples.

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Am currently working on said Archetype and it seems to becoming a brutal little one, especially when combined with the existing "Mirror" cards.

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Max are you talking about MY Mirror cards. Yu know the ones that reverse effects and ad spells/trtaps from the grave lol. Thanks If you are. If you aren't well I helped I inspuired it. Lol and yu ar right

About union. Its screws over some decks but helps others like Yubels Vs Zombies. And its geartown esque effect makes me happy. Kinda like a loop. The only advantage is that if they solemn yu lose half yurs too and if they upstart goblin, they gain 1000 too since it is the cards cost.

 

Sinestria Is by far worse though. I was going to carry over the Graveyard effect but it screws RFPs and makes zombies happy though I think the graveyard thing is more useful now. The whole yu get a free solemn judgement and it screws dem over in two waaaaays is worse though.

 

And Max, these cards are apart of a set. I can find the link If you wish to view the rest. The Archetypes are:

Desperate( high effect power for high price)

Sinister" Desperate" - deadly effect but dependent on desperate

Mirror - regain what you already have seen(lost in a mirror)for spells and traps as well as reverse costs/ effects.

I've been working on them for a while now and aside from these cards, I have most of the trump cards made, like Sinister Desperation and Mirror's Eye and Nayel, but I need more regular cards.

 

I'd appreciate help cough. And like I sed b4 Max, please feel free to do whatever

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@ Whamo: Indeed.

 

[spoiler=Monster Cards]

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b] If this card is the only monster you control, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. If this card is attacked, you can switch the attact target to another "Mirror" monster you control. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if a Spell or Trap Card effect causes either player to Tribute a monster(s) they control, after it resolves, that player Special Summons an equal number of monsters from their Graveyard whose Levels are equal to the Tributed monster

 

 

b] If this card is the only monster you control, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. If this card is attacked, you can switch the attact target to another "Mirror" monster you control. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if a Spell or Trap Card effect removes from play a card(s) from either player

 

 

b] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 3 "Mirror" monsters you control. This card

 

 

 

 

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b] This card is used to Ritual Summon "Fiend

 

 

 

 

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Effect: If you do not control a face-up "Mirror" monster, destroy this card. If a Spell or Trap Card effect causes either player to return a card(s) to their Deck, after it resolves, that player sends an equal number of cards from the top of their Deck to the Graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove from play 1 "Mirror" card in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position; it is treated as an Effect Monster. (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). If this card is the only monster you control, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. If this card is attacked, you can switch the attact target to another "Mirror" monster you control.

 

 

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Hmm thank you MAX....Mirror's May or may not be separate from the Mirror's Eye monsters....It depends on how It works the monsters all mimc the Whole Mirror Verse Card so It can be sidedecked now but they are diifereent too...They cover some and not all...And I like that...

 

Max if you don't mind I may be commanderring you for assistance with this set. If its ok...

I'll show you the posted cards already. Linkage. You may have ssen some of them...But please feel free to share opinions...ill prolly PM yu later...

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-196463.html

Link to the thread. Anyone can comment it I'd be happy. I also need image suggestions for a card call Sinister Halluciondragon & Mirror's Eye Halluciondragon...if you look at the set you'll see what I mean...now to add the cards

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@ Striker: What are the conditions? Or do you just want me to make a card and see which one people think is better?

 

@ Whamo: They sort of support the existing "Mirror" cards; like "Fiend's Mirror", "Mirror Force", "Fairy's Hand Mirror", "Magic-Reflecting Mirror", "Light-Absorbing Mirror" and "Dark Mirror Force". Basically, while the monsters mess with a player's strategy, the Traps stop them from making progress. Plus, with the re-designed "Beastly Mirror Ritual" card, if you know your opponent will try to get rid of your face-down Traps, you can use "Fiend's Mirror" as a substitute.

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