Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Lord Ursus]I wasn't complaining about him copying me! Also I suggest you help me bring some new members to YCM Alliance since the only person who has been posting besides me is DarkMark.[/spoier][spoiler=Max Darkness]If you think that my cards are overpowered and underpowered you should just give me some help with the effects 'cause I see nothing wrong with me LIGHT Set. [spoiler=Jediman09]Welcome to N.D.L. I personally hope you enjoy your stay. I joined when I was a level 1 and I stuck around until now I'm a level 3 going on 4! [spoiler=Everyone]Have you guys forgot about poor Striker9211! I would like to be a little more appreciated please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 max i like ur ideas and im kinda of confused with which chris goes with which picture and the bottom names are they just different namesand i have a question about Exalted Defender Chrisso those that mean if this card is special summoned i can remove it from play to summon For the Chris', you choose. You mentioned needing help with the names, so I've offered alternatives. (Ursus should know what the first four names mean.) "Exalted Defender Chris" cannot be Special Summoned in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Just to remind you Max, I haven't received my promotion yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 okay right now i was going to make more gods but all last night i was thinging of a good archtype name and i just though of one "BloodLust" im making them as written cards until i make or find some pics i already made oneName: BloodLust MinionATT: DarkCard Type: EffectLv. 2Trap/Magic Type: NoneRarity: CommonType: FiendATK/DEF: 200/300Effect: If this card is sent from the field to the graveyard send it to the top of the owners deck. When this card is special summoned it is unaffected by spell, traps, and monster effects and if the card cannot be destroyed the turn it was special summoned by this effect.i need another name maybe BloodLust Dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Lord Ursus]I wasn't complaining about him copying me! Also I suggest you help me bring some new members to YCM Alliance since the only person who has been posting besides me is DarkMark. Discuss this on your own thread' date=' not this club's. [spoiler=Max Darkness]If you think that my cards are overpowered and underpowered you should just give me some help with the effects 'cause I see nothing wrong with me LIGHT Set. "The Magician from the Light" is incredibly underpowered. It's Level 9' date=' but has an effect from a Level 5/6. Archetype ATK gain and LP loss upon destruction. Apart from being dull (very short) and overdone, it's in God card territory. All Level 9 and 10s have lengthy effects to make sure the cost is worth their summoning. The "Earthbound"s are almost invincible; "Yubel" similarly so; "Chimeratech Overdragon" can be utterly brutal and "Elemental Hero Magma Neos"' ATK can reach ridiculous heights. Also, what is interesting about Level 9s is their ATK is almost always on the lower side of 3500. There are no Level 9s with 4000 ATK, and so your card stands out as an anomaly. As for the "Sword of Light", when you say '...summon any God card from...' are you referring to the Obelisk, Osiris and Ra? Because if so, then it's a very poor card. Support for the Gods is poorly done, since they almost can't be defeated from the start. Plus, considering it allows you to Special Summon Obelisk or Osiris (not Ra since it would have 0 ATK) from your hand, it stupidly overpowered. Therefore, come up with an effect not including the gods. "Gamma Ray Burst" is stupidly overpowered. And it is. You stop your opponent' date=' destroy their monster and then kick them while they're down by gaining their monster's ATK. And since you don't mention an 'until' clause, I assume it's a permanent change. With this, "Megamorph" and "Overlimit" could be put to shame. "Perfect Machine King" attacks "D.D. Crow". You activate this card. "D.D. Crow" survives and is now a Level 1 with 2800 ATK. That's more than the anime 'Infinity' archetypes. "The Master of Light" is also very underpowered. You have to tribute 3 monsters and what you get is a LIGHT monster who powers up with the number of monsters in your Graveyard, which you've just reduced by removing 3 from play. So you've shot yourself in the foot and punched yourself in the face... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 What is the dragon going to look like? Edit: Max, I have an idea for the club. A duel tournament w/ a set of cards we have made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Abyss Keeper Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 I would like to join.Club Username: LordAbWhy you want to join: To become a great cardmaker!Favorite Card: Majestic Red DragonDo you play the game in real life: YesHow you were referred to the club: I saw it on chrid97's sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Max]If Ursus only replied to my thread I would't be doing that. Besides like I said, I feel that I'm not getting much appreciation for being on as much as I am. [spoiler=Something you need to know about me]I can get a bad temper really easily! I also have a lack of patience! I can only be patient for so long and I've been waiting for a long time for you o give me my promotion and to say something nice about my cards when I first post them. I like that you help, but I really like complements as well as things I need to work on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 okay right now i was going to make more gods but all last night i was thinging of a good archtype name and i just though of one "BloodLust" im making them as written cards until i make or find some pics i already made oneName: BloodLust MinionATT: DarkCard Type: EffectLv. 2Trap/Magic Type: NoneRarity: CommonType: FiendATK/DEF: 200/300Effect: If this card is sent from the field to the graveyard send it to the top of the owners deck. When this card is special summoned it is unaffected by spell' date=' traps, and monster effects and if the card cannot be destroyed the turn it was special summoned by this effect.i need another name maybe BloodLust Dragon?[/quote'] Seems rather overpowered for a Level 2. Full effect and destruction immunity? Tone it down. And only make Dragon-Type if you have to. Edit: Max' date=' I have an idea for the club. A duel tournament w/ a set of cards we have made.[/quote'] What do you mean exactly? I would like to join.Club Username: LordAbWhy you want to join: To become a great cardmaker!Favorite Card: Majestic Red Savior Demon's Dragon Do you play the game in real life: YesHow you were referred to the club: I saw it on chrid97's sig. Accepted. [spoiler=Max]If Ursus only replied to my thread I would't be doing that. Besides like I said' date=' I feel that I'm not getting much appreciation for being on as much as I am. [spoiler=Something you need to know about me']I can get a bad temper really easily! I also have a lack of patience! I can only be patient for so long and I've been waiting for a long time for you o give me my promotion and to say something nice about my cards when I first post them. I like that you help, but I really like complements as well as things I need to work on. I too can be prone to bouts of irritation and associated feelings, I am still human. Do you think I got praise the first time I posted cards on this site? My first thread had no replies whatsoever. And after that, it was 7 or 8/10 at best. After that, it was plain sailing; but you have yet to get over that hurdle. I have given you your promotion. And I don't like to lie and shower someone with praise because then they won't improve. Look at me. My card-making skill hasn't improved since I was a 3-star, 2,000 posts and 700 cards later; because I haven't recieved many, if any negative comments. My theory is that initial harshness leads to more rapid improvement, something I've seen with your cards. The point is to improve your abilities as quickly as possible, and I think that lavishing praise on someone for menial things is only a hinderance. As for work targets, you need to learn about balance. Check out well-rated cards and cards on the YGO wikia to give you an idea of cost versus benefit. Too much cost and it's underpowered, too much benefit and it's overpowered. The complements will come Striker, just not perhaps today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Max]Your last post is exactly what I'm talking about!!! [spoiler=Everyone]I hope you guys like my new sig!!! I put a link to N.D.L. on it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 but for the bloodlust cards i thought msybe they should be fiends a dasrk types are multi types and i just thought abouy making all the cards red[spoiler=Max]Your last post is exactly what I'm talking about!!! [spoiler=Everyone]I hope you guys like my new sig!!! I put a link to N.D.L. on it!!! how can u show me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Max]Your last post is exactly what I'm talking about!!! But it works. Sweet Lightning' date=' Lord Ursus and Sweeny Todd are three examples of people's cards I commented on; being truthful and telling them their mistakes. And look at their abilities now. If a card is good, I will say.If it has errors, I will say.If it is unbalanced, I will say.I will not lie and say a flawed card is flawless. but for the bloodlust cards i thought msybe they should be fiends a dasrk types are multi types and i just thought abouy making all the cards red Fiend-Types: FineDARK Monsters: FineDi-Typing: FineRed Aesthetics: Fine Just don't make a Level 2 that has an effect from a Level 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Well basically we will all duel. With a set of cards we have made. We have to use 2 sets but all cards in those sets u use don't have to be finished. We will conduct fair duels some how and this way we can give great commentary on the cards we've made. Max, I'm pretty sure you would love to put your occult science set to the test against say chaos zero or my set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 My sets would crush you all:twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Max]okay:) for some reason it didnt put the full effect[spoiler=Changed]If this card is sent from the field to the graveyard send it to the top of the owners deck. When this card is special summoned you can special summon 1 "Bloodlust Minion" from your hand. If there are 3 "Bloodlust Minions" on your side of the field send them to your deck and special summon 1 monster card with "BloodLust" in there name to your side of the field. How is this? [spoiler=Lore]If this card is sent from the field to the graveyard send it to the top of the owners deck. When this card is special summoned it is unaffected by spell, traps, and monster effects and if the card cannot be destroyed the turn it was special summoned by this effect.When this card is special summoned you can special summon 1 "Bloodlust Minion" from your hand. If there are 3 "Bloodlust Minions" on your side of the field send them to your deck and special summon 1 monster card with "BloodLust" in there name to your side of the field. . And should i put specific names or like in general or both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 [spoiler=Max]Your last post is exactly what I'm talking about!!! But it works. Sweet Lightning' date=' Lord Ursus and Sweeny Todd are three examples of people's cards I commented on; being truthful and telling them their mistakes. And look at their abilities now. If a card is good, I will say.If it has errors, I will say.If it is unbalanced, I will say.I will not lie and say a flawed card is flawless.[/quote'] That was not what I was talking about in my last post. I was talking about how I get little to no appreciation from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 But it works. Sweet Lightning' date=' Lord Ursus and Sweeny Todd are three examples of people's cards I commented on; being truthful and telling them their mistakes. And look at their abilities now.[/quote'] I have often found that negative comments help more than praise when making cards. If a person tells you what is wrong with the card(s), you can fix the errors, and remember the advice they gave you when making other cards. My OCG has improved since when I joined solely because of other members OCG fixes. I mean, take a look at my first set of Paper Mario cards and look at how far I've come since then! :) You can be a better cardmaker Striker, if you just accept the fixes to your cards that people in this club so often give. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 So sweet lightnimg and chrid what do you think aboiut thius competition idea wh? I was doing research on yvd and it did say that there is a way to put decks that we have created of ycm cards in the system so it is possible to do. Also we will need a judge and it will most likely be me so I can win my own tournament. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 how is it possible and i thi k its a good idea and does anyone have any opinions on my bloodlust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Hmmm, where is the link to this "YVD"? I only know Yugioh Network. XD It would be a time-consuming contest for sure, but maybe doable? I don't really know if I have time right now, but it sounds interesting. :) Also, how could you be sure a set isn't overpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 ???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Can you show them here w/o spoilers? I will comment them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 i only made one and its a written cardi need ideas and names Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Then post the written card, Chrid. I'll comment on it. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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