Shadow Ninja Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Comment and rate my cards.Give suggestions to improve cards.More cards coming soon. It's been a while, but i finally got this card done. Tell me if anything's wrong with the wording.Is it balanced? This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Naruto Uzumaki". This monster gains 100 ATK for every monster on your opponent's side of the field. When this monster is on the field, your opponent must select this monster as the attack target. When this monster destroys 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field, place 1 Kyuubi Counter on this card (max. 9). You can remove all Kyuubi Counters on this card to Special Summon 1 "Tailed Naruto", with the number of Counters removed, in its name. [spoiler= Naruto Uzumaki]If this is the only monster on your side of the field, you can Special Summon 3 "Shadow Tokens" (Warrior-Type/Wind/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position to your side of the field. The "Shadow Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). If this monster is the target of one of your opponent's attacks, you can tribute 1 "Shadow Token" to negate the attack. If this monster is destroyed, destroy all "Shadow Tokens" on the field. If this monster is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 "Kyuubi Naruto" to the field in face-up Attack Position. [spoiler= Token]This is my first token. [spoiler= Gaara of the Desert]This card is changed to Defense Position when it is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned successfully. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. If this card attacks while in Defense Position, apply the ATK of this card for damage calculation. If this monster attacks a Level 5 or higher monster, increase this monster's ATK by 300. You can tribute this monster from the field to Special Summon 1 "Shukaku The Ichibi" in face-up Attack position. [spoiler= Ultimate Defence - Shukaku Sheild] [spoiler= Itachi Uchiha]This monster is unaffected by the effects of all your opponent's Spell, Trap and Effect monster cards. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to activate 1 of the following effects:- If your opponent activates the effect of a Spell, Trap or Effect monster card, which targets any card on your side of the field or your Life Points, the effect is targeted at your opponent.- Select 1 of your opponent's monsters. The selected monster cannot attack or change it's Battle Position for 3 turns.- Remove from play one of your opponent's monsters on the field.This monster cannot attack in the turn that any of these effects are activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Pic's a little off, and the OCG is good.4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Anybody else has any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 pretty sweet cards. cant wait too see more 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Good pic, decent effect, solid OCG, over all, 9/10. maybe make Sasuke next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 This card is overpowered. It cannot be destroyed except by battle and can use 3 powerful effect for not much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Edited. How do you like it now?Still working on other cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Konoha'sYellowFlash Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 This card is so cool. Make more. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 still OP'ed, are still has OCG errors, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 What OCG Errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 well, the first sentence, for starters.what you put--The effect of all of your opponent's Spell, Trap and Effect monster cards has no effect on this monster.What it shoulds say --- This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spell, Trap, and Effect monster's effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Is that all the Ocg errors?Is it balanced now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Gaara added.comment and rate. Give suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Check out the new cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 8/10. Where'd you find that Gaara pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 New card added and my first token. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 i used that same naruto pic! Lol aswome naruto card effect. They other pics look odd (excluding the Naruto token) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 cool cards. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I animated Naruto Uzumaki :D! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Changed back the Itach pic. Working on Kyuubi Naruto now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Finally finished it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Bump What, no comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Kyuubi Naruto gets a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 hehehe...look my cards!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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