breann101 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Yes i know Beyblade is so old and out dated but Beyblade is the second show to get me into animation. Inu-yasha, Beyblade, then Yugioh, thats how it went. So i have made 2 cards based off of the show Beyblade, soon i will have more but for know i have: [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when "Dranzer" is face-up on your field. If "Dranzer" is face-up on the field during your Standby Phase, increase the ATK of this card by 300. If "Dranzer" is destroyed as a result of battle this card is destroyed.Once "Dranzer" is destroyed as a reasult of battle so is this card. and [spoiler=lore]When this card is Summoned you can Special Summon "Beyblade- Kai Hiwatari" from your hand. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for each "Beyblade" card in your Graveyard. [spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when "Driger" is face-up on the field. I have a feeling that these cards will needa lot of help. The pix i think are great but the OCG may not be so good, so if you have any idea's, please, feel free to help. Ok So i used Seto Kaiba666's edits on these cards. I hope there better for you guys Ray is done. It doesnt havea great effect. But here he is. I will have more up later. All atrubutes have been edited. Umm i did as someone asked and i figured it would be better so. here they are fully edited except fro Ray. I need to come up with a new EFFECT for him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 hm... I will rate a 7.5/10 to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 hm... I will rate a 7.5/10 to you. Yes you have rated but what do i need to change? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Like Face up = face-up, feild = field, grave yard = Graveyard, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Like Face up = face-up' date=' feild = field, grave yard = Graveyard, etc.[/quote'] "etc." dont help if she dont know the generals about cards in the first place numb nut... heres your OCG fixes hunny: oh btw. really awesome cards. i like the effects. just needs ocg help. Kai:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when "Dranzer" is face-up on your field. If "Dranzer" is face-up on the field during your Standby Phase, increase the ATK of this card by 300. If "Dranzer" is destroyed as a result of battle this card is destroyed. Dranzer:When this card is Summoned you can Special Summon "Beyblade- Kai Hiwatari" from your hand. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for each "Beyblade" card in your Graveyard. btw, dranzer is a little bit overpowered because its a 2000 atk 4 star that gets powered up. id either raise the level or lower the atk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 wow thankx baby anyone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inui uchiha Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 i like the idea and the cards, but the OCG, or the overall language used could be improved. Way to bring Beyblade back! I used to love that show ('cause i'm nerd!). -.5 language9.5 overall please make more and improve on these, like a tyson and dragoon (if i remember propperly). Otherwise awesome!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kierantoocool Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Nice :D 8/10 a little to powerfull for levels though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jman650 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Dranzer should be winged beast. Other than that, these cards don't really catch my eye. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Overpowered, much?Eh, imo Dranzer should have the power instead of Kai, since it's the beyblade that generally has the power.Of yeah, fix the OCG errors too.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inui uchiha Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 but kai can fight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 they are aight ..9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Keep posting more characters and their bit beast8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Overpowered' date=' much?Eh, imo Dranzer should have the power instead of Kai, since it's the beyblade that generally has the power.Of yeah, fix the OCG errors too.6/10[/quote'] Hey i fixed tthe over powered part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 i like the idea and the cards' date=' but the OCG, or the overall language used could be improved. Way to bring Beyblade back! I used to love that show ('cause i'm nerd!). -.5 language9.5 overall please make more and improve on these, like a tyson and dragoon (if i remember propperly). Otherwise awesome!!![/quote'] I agree, make more =)language? keep it yugioh bud, its ocg. her speech is fine. Dranzer should be winged beast. Other than that' date=' these cards don't really catch my eye. 7/10[/quote'] why? she could make it a pyro too. theyre not even real cards. they dont HAVE to be anything. and if they didnt catch your eye when the title clearly says "New Beyblade card set" why look at them? Overpowered' date=' much?Eh, imo Dranzer should have the power instead of Kai, since it's the beyblade that generally has the power.Of yeah, fix the OCG errors too.6/10[/quote'] Theyre cards....not beyblades....and not ppl....they go together and kai's got the power. besides, without kai, dranzer would be a paper weight. Keep posting more characters and their bit beast8.9/10 completely agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 i like the idea and the cards' date=' but the OCG, or the overall language used could be improved. Way to bring Beyblade back! I used to love that show ('cause i'm nerd!). -.5 language9.5 overall please make more and improve on these, like a tyson and dragoon (if i remember propperly). Otherwise awesome!!![/quote'] Im already trying to make a ray and driger card^_^ I will have all the bladebreakers and there bitbeast on here^_^i like the idea and the cards' date=' but the OCG, or the overall language used could be improved. Way to bring Beyblade back! I used to love that show ('cause i'm nerd!). -.5 language9.5 overall please make more and improve on these, like a tyson and dragoon (if i remember propperly). Otherwise awesome!!![/quote'] I agree, make more =)language? keep it yugioh bud, its ocg. her speech is fine. Dranzer should be winged beast. Other than that' date=' these cards don't really catch my eye. 7/10[/quote'] why? she could make it a pyro too. theyre not even real cards. they dont HAVE to be anything. and if they didnt catch your eye when the title clearly says "New Beyblade card set" why look at them? Overpowered' date=' much?Eh, imo Dranzer should have the power instead of Kai, since it's the beyblade that generally has the power.Of yeah, fix the OCG errors too.6/10[/quote'] Theyre cards....not beyblades....and not ppl....they go together and kai's got the power. besides, without kai, dranzer would be a paper weight. Keep posting more characters and their bit beast8.9/10 completely agree Thanks babe^_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 First card is OP, since the second card can get them to swarm. Change 'Dranzer' effect to tribute him to summon other dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 First card is OP' date=' since the second card can get them to swarm. Change 'Dranzer' effect to tribute him to summon other dude.[/quote']even if its a just for fun card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 you mighta meant that in the first place babe. but the way you have it right now, dranzer can activate his effect even if hes special summoned. changing it to Tribute Summon might not be a bad idea. and remember. ppl on these forums take everything to be a real card ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inui uchiha Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 yeah, some people take everything like it's a real card. and by language, i ment not making things so confusing on the card, and thats not OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breann101 Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 ugh...... im confused now...... ummm ok babe i'll wait until you get home to fix these and i'll hold off on making ray, driger, tyson, dragoon, max, and draceil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 yeah' date=' some people take everything like it's a real card. and by language, i ment not making things so confusing on the card, and thats not OCG![/quote'] you just gave me the definition of OCG. ocg is the grammar of the card and how easy it is to read. ugh...... im confused now...... ummm ok babe i'll wait until you get home to fix these and i'll hold off on making ray' date=' driger, tyson, dragoon, max, and draceil.[/quote'] no hun its fine. pm them to me. you know i like helping you out with your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 bad pics.... Anyways animation is normal cartoons, anime is asian (mainly Japanese and Chinese) cartoons aka Japanese Animations (Even though Yu-Gi-Oh is chinese) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 bad pics.... Anyways animation is normal cartoons' date=' anime is asian (mainly Japanese and Chinese) cartoons aka Japanese Animations (Even though Yu-Gi-Oh is chinese)[/quote']u do know that beyblade is an anime right? meaning japanese animation. and you dont belong on the forums if you think yugioh is chinese. its japanese. the pics are fine. kai is good and dranzer simply needs a background but the monster itself is a good pic. how did you get 4 stars? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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