Immortal Chaos Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 DARK Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, destroy all monsters on your side of the field (Excluding this card). For every monster destroyed by this effect, this card gains an additional attack this turn. If this card deals damage to your opponent, they must discard 2 random cards from their hand. If this card attacks with an ATK higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage. Rates? Hates? Fixes? All Welcome. Side note: I dont think this is my best work..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Berserker- Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Destroy all OTHER monsters you control maybe? Or it won't work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I think it's a bit overpowered with the 2 card discard, since it also pierces. Ocg and pic look good though, 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Immortal Chaos Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Thank you, I hadnt realized that until you pointed it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 The card gains an additional ATK...It is not clear how many 'additional ATK' the card receives, is it? ;) Perhaps you should figure that out, and add it to the card's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 I'd say OP. Everything else is good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 not bad of an effect, though with 2900 base atk it is a bit on the OPed end 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 The name is terribly bland. Picture could use improvement also. deals damage to your opponent's Life PointsAs mentioned above, you don't state how much ATK it gains. This card looks frightfully UP. You nuke your own field to bring out a beatstick? :/ Frankly, it wouldn't be worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffee Black Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 to keep it from being OP, you could decrease ATK and DEF or tribute more than 2 DARK warriors, maybe 4 or 5 if you keep 2900 ATK. you could also make it so you can't normal or special summon a monster while it's on the field to restrict it a bit more. i really like this idea, please improve it. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UltimaAku Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 id say lower the attack to 2300 and thats one hell of a good card :) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Immortal Chaos Posted August 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Ok, for starters, it only gains an attack for every monster on your side of the field it kills, not to mention you have to have a free space to summon him, so it only gets a max of 4 extra attacks, and some decks wont even get 4 monsters out before you play him. Not to mention the 2 monster have to be in the grave, and must be dark and warrior-types. Yes I know it seems OP'ed, believe me, I realized this when I made it lol Im rethinking how to fix it, and taking into consideration all your comments. And if you think about it, is piercing and discard effect really OP'ed, look at Meifist The Infernal General, she pierces and makes your opponent discard a card. Anyways, Im working on this card's remake, so I hope to have it done soon. Thank you for all the feed back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 The picture needs some colour to it. This card gains an additional ATK Other than that, i didnt see any major OCG errors. I think that the card is balanced. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 personally it's overpowered for me and the effect is very bland7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Berserker- Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 People doesn't understand what you say with additional attack. You must word it like Ben-kei. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 You could say: For every monster destroyed by this effect, this card gains 200 ATK...Not just 'additional ATK'. That's not clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MujinTengu Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 about the additional ATK i don't know...otherwise this a good card thought its a little OP and you know if someone want to use this card he probably will have all the needed for him so its OP surly.nice picture and all..7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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