Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Been a long time ever since I posted Written Cards. [spoiler=Volume 1]Chrazisen, Paladin of Doubt2460/1834Level 5WATER AttributeWarrior/EffectWhen this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, select 1 card that shares one of the words in the name of that monster other than "the", "a", or "of" and remove it from play. Once per turn, you can look at your opponent's deck and hand. If 5 of them share a word in their names other than "the", "a", or "of", discard 2 cards from your hand and remove those 5 cards and the top card of your opponent's deck from play. Phantom Speed Eater?/?Level 4LIGHT AttributeMetal/Fiend/Synchro/EffectIf this card is in your Extra Deck, once per turn, you can reduce the Level of a monster by 1. That monster cannot be used as a Synchro Material except for the Synchro Summon of this card. When this card is Summoned, remove all Speed Counters from the field. This card's ATK and DEF become the number of Speed Counters removed x 400. As long as this card is on the field, negate the effects of "Speed World", all "Speed Spell" cards, and effects that allow your opponent to remove cards from their decks (drawing or otherwise). Emergency Speed Eater1680/?Level 4LIGHT AttributeMetal/Fiend/Chain/EffectYou can chain the Chain Summoning of this card to the effect of a "Speed Spell" card or an effect that removes a card from the opponent's deck. Negate the effect of the card and remove it from play, remove all Speed Counters on the field, and Chain Summon this card from your Extra Deck. This card's DEF is equal to the number of Speed Counters removed by this card's effect times 456. This card can attack directly. During the End Phase of a turn in which this card attacked directly by its own effect, send this card to the Extra Deck. You do not receive Battle Damage in battles involving this card. Speed Eater Volt Phoenix2834/6Level 7LIGHT AttributeWinged Beast/Thunder/Fusion/Effect1 monster + 1 monsterThis card is treated as a Metal-type monster. This card can be Fusion Summoned by sending its Fusion Materials to the Graveyard from either side of the field. If one of this card's Fusion materials was a monster your opponent controls, halve the ATK and DEF of this card. When this card is Summoned, if a "Speed World" card is on the field, place 12 Speed Counters on it. As long as this card is on the field, neither player can remove Speed Counters on the field as payment for a cost. When a "Speed Spell" card is activated by your opponent, double the ATK and DEF of this card. When you activate a "Speed Spell" card, you lose 2000 Life Points, and this card's ATK and DEF become 100. [spoiler=Volume 2]Raptor Speed Eater2100/0Level 4WIND AttributeWinged Beast/Metal/TunerThis creature is one of the "Speed Eaters," a group of swift fighters that destroy the essence of a Turbo Duel. These creatures would've been banned from the world of Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's, but that's the same universe that sealed away the Cyberdarks and banned Gate Blocker, so there's actually nothing to worry about. Deck Speed Eater1747/1039Level 4LIGHT AttributeMetal/Winged Beast/TunerThis card is treated as a Fiend-type monster. Once per turn, you can look at the top 3 cards of both players' decks. Special Summon any "Speed Eater" monsters you can find to your side of the field, and send the rest to the Graveyard. If one of the Special Summoned monsters was a "Raptor Speed Eater", then draw 1 card. Deck Destruction Speed Eater2837/2639Level 7WIND AttributeMetal/Winged Beast/ChargeThis card is treated as a Fiend-type monster. Whenever a "Speed Spell" is activated or a "Speed Eater" monster is Special Summoned, place 1 counter on this card and 1 Speed Counter on a "Speed World" card. If there are 5 counters on this card, you can Charge Summon this monster to your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, remove all Speed Counters on the field and draw 1 card for each Speed Counter. Up to 5 cards can be drawn by this card's effect. Fier, Paladin of Fear2034/1093Level 5LIGHT AttributeWarrior/EffectOnce per turn, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total Level of all monsters you control x 200. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can select one monster your opponent controls. That monster must attack this monster this turn. (If it is in Defense Position, change its position to Attack Position before it attacks.) If this card is selected as an attack target, you can inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each monster your opponent controls, and negate the attacks of all other monsters your opponent controls for the rest of your opponent's turn. [spoiler=Bonus Cards]Belias the Gigas2280/1120Level 5FIRE AttributeBeast/EffectWhen this card is attacked by a WATER monster, double the ATK of the WATER monster during damage calculation only. When this card is attacked by a FIRE monster, negate the attack and increase your Life Points equal to the ATK of the FIRE monster. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to inflict 2000 damage to your opponent's Life Points and to multiply this card's ATK by 1.5. Cockroach Bumper0/1950Level 4EARTH AttributeInsect/EffectTwice per turn, you can switch this card's ATK and DEF points. When this card battles, destroy the other monster after damage calculation. Battle Damage inflicted to your Life Points is dealt to your opponent instead. Once per turn, you can select one monster your opponent controls. That monster must attack this card on your opponent's Battle Phase. [spoiler=Volume 3]Speed Eater Goomba1020/10Level 3WIND AttributeBeast/EffectIf this card is summoned, remove all Speed Counters from the field, and inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each Speed Counter removed. If this card is destroyed, both players gain 4 Speed Counters. As long as this card is on the field or in the Graveyard, "Speed Spell" cards cannot be activated. Chaotic UltimaQuick-Play SpellThis card can only be activated during its owner's End Phase. Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field, halve the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field, and halve both players' Life Points. Speed Eater Chaotic Ultima?/2527Level 6WATER AttributeWinged Beast/Metal/Ritual/EffectYou can destroy 1 "Speed Eater" monster to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points. You can remove 1 Speed Counter to inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed, remove all Speed Counters and destroy all cards on the field, and both players discard all cards from their hands. The owner of this card skips their next turn. Speed Drain GateRitual SpellThis card is used to Ritual Summon "Speed Eater" Ritual monsters from your Deck or graveyard. You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 6 or more from the field or your hand. Speed Eater DrawContinuous SpellWhen Speed Counters are removed, draw 1 card. If there are no Speed Counters, destroy this card and draw 1 card. Link to comment
Zkaiser Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Chrazisen, Paladin of Doubt2460/1834Level 5WATER AttributeWarrior/EffectWhen this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, select 1 card that shares one of the words in the name of that monster other than "the", "a", or "of" and remove it from play. Once per turn, you can look at your opponent's deck and hand. If 5 of them share a word in their names, discard 2 cards from your hand and remove those 5 cards and the top card of your opponent's deck from play.I like this guys effect but, I can't fully understand it. You need to clarify on where you're selecting the card from in the first effect. And the second effect is really broken. Each turn you can look at your opponent's hand and deck? Make it when he's summoned and raise the cost, then we have a deal. 7/10 on Doubt guy. I can't judge the others, because I'm not a speed duelist. Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Chrazisen' date=' Paladin of Doubt2460/1834Level 5WATER AttributeWarrior/EffectWhen this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, select 1 card that shares one of the words in the name of that monster other than "the", "a", or "of" and remove it from play. Once per turn, you can look at your opponent's deck and hand. If 5 of them share a word in their names, discard 2 cards from your hand and remove those 5 cards and the top card of your opponent's deck from play.[/quote']I like this guys effect but, I can't fully understand it. You need to clarify on where you're selecting the card from in the first effect. And the second effect is really broken. Each turn you can look at your opponent's hand and deck? Make it when he's summoned and raise the cost, then we have a deal. 7/10 on Doubt guy. I can't judge the others, because I'm not a speed duelist. I'm fairly sure that looking at the opponent's hand and deck isn't a big deal. Link to comment
Zkaiser Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Do you shuffle the deck afterward? Because if not, then it's pretty bad. Also looking at the opponent's hand is a big deal. No card lets you do it without a price. Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Ahahahahaha. Many of Konami's cards are ridiculously underpowered. Link to comment
Zkaiser Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 True, but that's what makes the game somewhat balanced. Anyway, I like Warrior of Doubt. It's just, being able to potentially removed 5 cards in my opponent's deck from play is pretty broken, and the 2 card discard doesn't alleviate the guilt. Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 True' date=' but that's what makes the game somewhat balanced. [b']If nobody (at least in their right mind) uses it, it might as well be out of the game.[/b] Anyway, I like Warrior of Doubt. It's just, being able to potentially removed 5 cards in my opponent's deck from play is pretty broken, and the 2 card discard doesn't alleviate the guilt. T'is an archetype killer. If your opponent uses an archetype, they get punished for it. I'm not sure if you're balancing the conditions and cost with the effect. Say, you might say a card with "You can only activate this card if you have 99999 Life Points. You win the Duel." as it's card text might be overpowered. Okay, that's probably an exaggeration, but you get the idea. Link to comment
Diaboli Mors Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 pretty good 9/10 Link to comment
.Leo Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 pretty good. only problem is the AATK is kinda odd because it is 2684. anyway nice job ~8/10~ Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 pretty good. only problem is the AATK is kinda odd because it is 2684. anyway nice job ~8/10~ There is nothing wrong with that. >_> Link to comment
Toffee. Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 2460/1834Level 5WATER AttributeWarrior/EffectWhen this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, select 1 card that shares one of the words in the name of that monster other than "the", "a", or "of" and remove it from play. Once per turn, you can look at your opponent's deck and hand. If 5 of them share a word in their names, discard 2 cards from your hand and remove those 5 cards and the top card of your opponent's deck from play.HECK YES! Pretty much if it destroys a "Dark" monster, the opponent is insta-death'dI <3 it Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Added more cards. Link to comment
DeREVOLUTION Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Nice, pretty balanced. First post in written cards :/ Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Nice' date=' pretty balanced. [b']First post in written cards :/[/b] NO U. Post moar. Especially cards. Anyways, I'm going to make some more after I post this post. Link to comment
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