Blamonchesix Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Eventually, I'll post my older cards with the improvements people gave me on them (Of course I'll acknowledge them at the card they criticized) :D . For now, I made My first WIND monster. (PLS COMMENT) (^_^) Bagyo - King of CalamityLevel 8WIND/FiendATK 2000DEF 3000Effect: This card can be Special Summoned if your opponent controls a monster with an ATK of 2000 points or more. Once per turn, you can select 1 card in your Graveyard and remove it from play to return 1 card on the field to its owners hand. Hope you like it. Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 You didn't exactly specify where you could special summon it from, or if there's a cost. Maybe you could rephrase the first part to read "If your opponent controls a monster with more than 2000 ATK, you can special summon this card from your hand." but that is way too easy to pull off, making it OP'ed. Maybe you could put a cost too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Nice card the drawing is quite good but the effect is bland.Try better next time.7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 What kind of cost? (I'm 1 of the 5% who would grab some popcorn and then go get a nice seat to watch and start chanting JUMP! JUMP! JUMP! JUMP! btw) :DOh, and its Special Summon is from the hand. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 You didn't exactly specify where you could special summon it from' date=' or if there's a cost. Maybe you could rephrase the first part to read "If your opponent controls a monster with more than 2000 ATK, you can special summon this card from your hand." but that is way too easy to pull off, making it OP'ed. Maybe you could put a cost too.[/quote'] This^. You could put a Life Point cost or discarding cards or whatever, I would personally go with Life Points. Pic is good considering it is self drawn though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Thanks. I'll be sure to note that. Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 bland effect, give it another one. The rest looks great though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 You mean redo the whole effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 no, just add another effect onto it and you're good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Gotcha. Say, how come you don't have any cards that you created? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 WOW!1 starThat good artwork, i support self Drawn Cards..flawless OCGBalanced Usually a 8.5/10But its a 9.9/10, for beeing self drawn, and made by a newb Good job, dude.Keep it up =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks. I give you 1 rep for that. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 amazing card and picture, your a great drawer :) im also a drawer myself 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 i like it, wish i could draw like that :Deffect seems balanced, maybe a lil on the powerful side but oh well.congratulations for a such a good card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks. I give you 1 rep for that. (^_^) Hey, thx for that =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kristoferjm Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Amazing card. The picture is self-drawn? It's a wonderful picture, and looks like it came directly out of the Anime. The effect is pretty good, too, though could have a more interesting premise. Otherwise, it is one amazing card. I'd honestly like to see some more cards with similar art/design, and I'd definitely comment on a set like that. Keep working hard !! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 No Problem. But the card is a little OP so I'll have to edit it. (>_<)Amazing card. The picture is self-drawn? It's a wonderful picture' date=' and looks like it came directly out of the Anime. The effect is pretty good, too, though could have a more interesting premise. Otherwise, it is one amazing card. I'd honestly like to see some more cards with similar art/design, and I'd definitely comment on a set like that. Keep working hard !! [b']8/10[/b] I do have 3 other cards, but I'm still editing them since some were OP and UP.I'll post a set when I have made enough. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kristoferjm Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 No Problem. But the card is a little OP so I'll have to edit it. (>_<) The card is definitely not OPed' date=' whoever gave you that bit of information is wrong. Sure the card is powerful, but it's an easily stoppable power. I do have 3 other cards, but I'm still editing them since some were OP and UP.I'll post a set when I have made enough. (^_^) EDIT: I'd definitely like to see that too !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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