kriskirla Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=lore]Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "In Trainning Confuse Token" ( Psychic-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in face-up defence position . If this card would be destroy, estroy 1 "In Trainning Confuse Token" Instead. During each of your Standby Phase, pay 300 Life Point for each "In Trainning Confuse Token" on your side of the field. You can tribute this card on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 "Mind Confuser" from you hand. [spoiler=lore]When your opponent monster declare an attack to a monster on your side of the field, you can discard up to 5 card(s) in your hand to the Graveyard. Special Summon 1 "Confuse Token" ( Psychic-Type/DARK/Level 7/ATK ?/DEF ?), it's ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of card(s) you have discarded x500. The attack target is switch to "Confuse Token". During each of your Standby Phase, pay 600 Life Point for each "Confuse Token" you control. If not, destroy all "Confuse Token" on your side of the field.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 a 2500 atk token is too much since you didn't say it can't attack, and 1800 atk for lv7 is too little, make it higher 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 capatilize types, psychic cards have to do with other psychic cards 3.99/4 of the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 I type so many wrong, let me fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 1800ATK should be a 4 star.Capitalize TypeOcg errors.try this:When your opponent declares an attack on 1 of your monsters, you can discard up to 5 cards in your hand to Special Summon 1 "Confuse Token" ( Psychic-Type/DARK/Level 7/ATK ?/DEF ?). The ATK and DEF of the "Confuse Token" are equal to the number of cards discarded x 500. The attack target is switched to "Confuse Token". During each of your Standby Phases, pay 600 Life Points for each "Confuse Token" you control. If not, destroy all "Confuse Token". 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 not bad but i'd either lower it's level or make it's ATK higher8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Nice work, just needs some fixes with the grammatical side of it. Like opponent => opponent'sswtich => switchedthats all really. that and lower its level to 4 or even 5.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 capatilize types' date=' psychic cards have to do with other psychic cards 3.99/4 of the time[/quote'] 3.99/4 means some cards don't oh smart one. Pretty good. Just a few OCG errors (Just fix the level ;)) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Renardo Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 The artwork isn't so bad. Then again, this is coming from someone who uses Microsoft Paint to make simple pictures to pass off as "artwork".A few grammatical errors made me a bit confused at first, but I got the gist of it.You should lower the level, it looks more like a four star monster.In fact, the card looks to be a common card: you should consider changing the rarity as well. Overall: I give this card a 8/10. Wouldn't make a bad rare card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 thanks for the comment. But I am sorry for all of you, I can't change the level of this monster until the tourney i have joined ends. Maybe you guys can help me make this monster like a level 7 or higher monster. ^.^I added it ATK point, maybe this look more like a level 7 monster. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Renardo Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 thanks for the comment. But I am sorry for all of you' date=' I can't change the level of this monster until the tourney i have joined ends. Maybe you guys can help me make this monster like a level 7 or higher monster. ^.^[hr']I added it ATK point, maybe this look more like a level 7 monster. ^.^ Looks better in terms of stats now.I have a card called "Master Gig" that I got out of a pack the other day; it's a Level 8 Psychic-Type monster with ATK/DEF of 2600/1400. The effect is, as the card reads:"Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy monsters your opponent controls equal to the number of face-up Psychic-Type monsters you control." The only reason I mention this card is to compare it to your card... so, a Level 7 with 2500 ATK and 1800 DEF seems reasonable enough to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks, that would help me alot. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 ok, with the atk increased, I'll raise my rate up to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I only wish you'd put a support card here....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 0.0? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 it'd certainly make things more interesting (plus you'd get more comments) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 DO you mean a suppor spell or monster?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 oh either is fine with me, that's your call to make Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Or even trap, lol. ^.^ you tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 you just roll a die or something 1 or 2: monster 3 or 4: spell 5 or 6: trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 -.- You tell me, i make it. oh ya, but not tomorrow because i am not going to be at home for the whole day. lol^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 ok, then I say make another monster card for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Ok^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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