Fawlcon Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Alright im going to try and make a set. It's gonna be called Revenge of the Dark. I dont know how to make the spoilers things...so im just going to throw out my first card for this set out and then fix this post later...for now though, just rate/fix/discuss my cards. tell me if you need to description written out. Effect: On each of your end phases, send this card to your graveyard. On each of your standby phases, special summon this card from your graveyard to your side of the field. Each time this effect is successful, this card gains 100 ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play.Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters. Once per during your battle phase, turn one monster into a DARK type monster. Any DARK type monsters destroyed by this monster gets sent to your graveyard. When this monster is destroyed in battle, special summon as many level 4 or below DARK type monsters onto your side of the field. Their effects are negated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Some OCG errors and its effect would screw up peoples decks way too much. Pretty good for a newbie so ill give it a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Some OCG errors and its effect would screw up peoples decks way too much. Pretty good for a newbie so ill give it a 7.5/10 any way i should change it? maybe just remove from play one card from the opponents graveyard for one turn? i was thinking of that. and thanks for the 7.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 That might work better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 k i fixed the card and a new one will be coming up shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 not too shabby at all. didnt get to see the original but i say this effect works better. nicely done :D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 thanks for the 8/10. I hope all my cards are balanced and unique, which is why everyone needs to pitch in and say whats wrong and right: it'll help me a lot with not only improving my set, but improving my skill in making cards overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 too powerful of an effect, but for new cards they still get 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 too powerful of an effect' date=' but for new cards they still get 7.7/10[/quote'] which card? and thanks, so far my ratings have been good! Tomorrow I'll get a tuner plus a synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 BUMP!! all new cards! Please help me with ocg, and balancing the effects. Also rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Mystical Awakenings's effect is bland, but it's effective. Still, it should have another one 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Mystical Awakenings's effect is bland' date=' but it's effective. Still, it should have another one 7.9/10[/quote'] thanks. I'll be sure to add another, maybe something to do with each players hand....*gets an idea* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 fine, you put that idea of yours into a card and let's see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 fine' date=' you put that idea of yours into a card and let's see it[/quote'] alright i updated it. OCG is prolly bad but the main point is if the effect is balanced or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 ok, it does balanced out, so I'll raise the rate to 8.3/10 for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
webgamers Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Ha, i almost used the pic u used for "Soul Master of Graveyard" for one of my cards, im glad i didnt :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fawlcon Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Ha' date=' i almost used the pic u used for "Soul Master of Graveyard" for one of my cards, im glad i didnt :D[/quote'] haha. I'm guessing it was ment to be for me? lol jk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
webgamers Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Ha' date=' i almost used the pic u used for "Soul Master of Graveyard" for one of my cards, im glad i didnt :D[/quote'] haha. I'm guessing it was ment to be for me? lol jk. Possibly :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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