Ruy Blackbird Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 My 2nd card. The grammar is probably off, and I am not quite sure how the OCG looks. Please correct this as awesome as you did with Clockwork Maiden. :D The OCG is probably off, please tell me what is wrong, instead of just pointing it out. The effect might be OP'ed and abusable, please tell me if that is the case. I am a newbie, so please give me feedback I can use. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironcore Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 effect is ok,and the pictures not bad.now for OCG correction,first its "if this card is desroyed",second "you can Special Summon it to your opponents side of the field,during the End Phase.and finally dont have the last effect because what if there is a monster already on that space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 the OCG is already pointed out effect well suited for lv2 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 effect is ok' date='and the pictures not bad.now for OCG correction,first its "if this card is desroyed",second "you can Special Summon it to your opponents side of the field,during the End Phase.and finally dont have the last effect because what if there is a monster already on that space.[/quote'] Thank you very much. I'll correct them soon, I just want one or two more opinions. The last effect is not meant as position on the field, but ATK-position or DEF-position. I read somewhere that, this was the way to put it. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 pretty good you are gonna make some great cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 You have chose a nice pic :) The effect is OK, so I'll give it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Thank you both of you, I'll edit the OCG when I get back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 This---->(If this card is destroyed while on the field) isn't this the only way card can get destroyed?? And the OCG fix:(you can Special Summon it to your opponents side of the field during the End Phase) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Should be there now, thanks for the correction. Isn't "destroyed" from the hand/deck also called destroyed? or is that sent to the graveyard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 no it discard. ^.^ donno, maybe some card write that 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 sent to the graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 What bagon46 said. And an excellent card for a new member. Unique effect, well suited for a monster that level. Well done. 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Thanks alot, I just saw the picture and had to make the card. And I am not the one to make Super-Epic cards. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Thats actual a pretty neat card, effect is neat and the pic really fits the name. lets go..8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Thank you both. New card is up, this time a Field Spell. I know the OCG is horrible, I am a nebie after all. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 hmm...the monster card is ok...no OCG errors...good for a noob...:Dthe 2nd card is pretty amazing....a very original effect...I see no OCG errors...and the pic fits to the card...I have to tell you that you are the best noob I've seen in a while...:D rate:8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Oh my god, thank you very much! The monster had a few errors, but some awesome people helped me correct it. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RubberDuckZilla Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 I like them a lot, the pics are awesome :) 10/10 :D ~D P.S: please check out my new cards Seven Deadly Sins Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Thank you, will check if I get the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 cards aren't that bad 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Aren't that bad? and You give me 8,2? Does your rating go up to 20 or are you just afraid of good? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 The Time Reverse Zone is pretty effect both ways, whereas the Clockwork Maiden seems to be a zone eater for your opponent so not bad. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Thank you for the comment. Clockwork Maiden can function as a zone-eater, but if you manage to destroy it on your side of the field in Defense-position, it is Summoned in Attack-position to your opponent, so you are free to destroy it with a monster, deal some damage and have it return to you. P.S. Your signature was our motto at a soccer tournament against teams 3 years older than us, we lost a lot of weakness that day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 The first card is essentially Fiber Jar... Second card OCG fix: This card cannot be Set. If this card is destroyed, Special Summon it in the opposite Position it was destroyed to your opponent's field during the End Phase of this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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