Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 ive decided to make a few cards, tell meh what u think. u'll have to forgive me if u see any ocg problems, but at the very least im trying to make the cards resemblant of the character/event traits. well, here they are...Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned while you control a face-up "Kyon". This Monster is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. This card cannot be tributed or destroyed in battle. Once per turn you may discard one card to draw one card.Lore:This monster cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card battles with any non-spellcaster or non-warrior, destroy that monster at the end of the damage step. This effect may only be applied if there is a face-up "Kyon" on your side of the field. You may special summon one level 4 or lower machine or warrior type monster from your graveyard when this card is removed from the field.Lore:This card cannot be selected as an attack target. This card cannot declare an attack. While you control this face-up card, you may pay 800 Life points to special summon a "Kyon" from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard.Lore:If this card battles and you control no other monsters, destroy this card at the end of the damage step. If this card is face-up and you control an "Nagato Yuki", you can search your deck once per turn for a "Mikuru Asahina" or "Itsuki Koizumi" and add it to your hand. Lore:You may Special Summon this card from your hand if there is a face-up "Kyon" on your side of the field. If there is a "Suzumiya Haruhi" face-up on your side of the field, this card gains 2000 ATK. When this card battles and would be destroyed, you may negate the destruction once this turn. Lore:While this card is active, your opponent cannot declare an attack. Your opponent also cannot recive effect or battle damage. You may keep this card active for a maximum of 8 turns by skipping your draw phase each time.While this card is active, only Psychic-type monsters and "Nagato Yuki" may declare an attack. When this card is destroyed, you may search your deck for a monster with 1500 ATK or less and either add it to your hand OR special summon it to the field.When this card is activated, you may select one of your opponent's monsters and change it's battle position. That monster cannot change battle position until your next turn, except with a card effect. If you destroy a monster whose position was changed becasue of this card, your opponent must discard their hand and draw 5 new cards.When this card is activated, your opponent must reveal the 11th card nearest the top. If it is a monster, they must special summon it if possible. If it is not a monster, send that card to the graveyard and search your deck for one "Mikuru Beam" and add it to your hand.Activate while you control either a face-up "Kyon" or a face-up "Suzumiya Haruhi". Negate the activation and effect of a spell or trap card, or the activation of an effect monster's effect, and destroy it.Activate this card when your opponent's monster changes into defense mode OR if you control at least 3 monsters on your side of the field. Destroy all monsters your opponent controls. You must skip your next Battle phase or Draw Phase, depending on when this card resolves.When this card is activated, select one of your opponent's monsters and remove it from play for 3 turns. On the third turn, special summon that monster to your opponent's side of the field. When the monster returns, it's ATK will be increased by 700 and your opponent's life points will be reduced by 700 for every monster they control.Tribute one monster you control. Negate the activation of a Spell Card / Trap Card / Normal Summon / Flip Summon / Special Summon and destroy the Spell Card, Trap Card, or Summoned monster.Activate only while you control a "Nagato Yuki". While "Nagato Yuki" is on your side of the field, "Kyon" cannot be affected by any card effects (except this card) or by battle. "Nagato Yuki" may not declare an attack. Once per turn you may destroy up to 3 cards your opponent controls for every card you discard from your hand.When this card is activated you may destroy one card your opponent controls, then draw one card. You may not declare an attack this turn.You may pay life points in multiples of 1000. If you do, then destroy a card for every 1000 you pay and inflict 500 for every card destroyed. At the end phase of this turn, if there is a "Bouken Desho? Desho?" in your graveyard, gain life points equal to half the amount you paid.While this card is active, your "Nagato Yuki" gains 400 ATK and a "Suzumiya Haruhi" gains 500 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed until the third turn after this card's activation.While you control no monsters, once per turn you may special summon a "Kyon", "Nagato Yuki", "Itsuki Koizumi", or a "Mikuru Asahina" from your hand.Draw one card. Then your opponent designates either monster, spell, or trap. If they are wrong, then draw one more card. If they are correct then pay 1000 life points or your opponent may destroy one monster card you control of their choice. i plan on finishing a full set. So let me know if theyre TOO overpowered, but seriously dont post if all you have to say is "bad ocg" way too OP'ed cuz that doesnt tell me anything other than u are overly critical about this. i mean this to be a constructive review, not flames for not being god at making perfect cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Not too bad7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 EDIT: Added Asakura Ryoko's Trap 8/28/09 10:38 PM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 hmmm.... 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haruhi-chan Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Awesome cards! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Endless 8 + Wave Motion Cannon = Fun not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danilyu Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Suzumiya Haruhi is WAY overpowered. Also, you need to work on the OCG (mainly on capitalization, but there are other problems as well). I would give this set a 6.5/10, but since it's Haruhi, I rate it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Suzumiya Haruhi is WAY overpowered. Also' date=' you need to work on the OCG (mainly on capitalization, but there are other problems as well). I would give this set a 6.5/10, but since it's Haruhi, I rate it 7.5/10[/quote'] XD yes i realize Suzumiya Haruhi is OPed ...of course as all haruhi fans know she is in essence a god. so...i did try my best to tone her down >.> didnt really want a "Divine-Beast" Haruhi roaming about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Kyon: Facepalm = Epic Win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danilyu Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Suzumiya Haruhi is WAY overpowered. Also' date=' you need to work on the OCG (mainly on capitalization, but there are other problems as well). I would give this set a 6.5/10, but since it's Haruhi, I rate it 7.5/10[/quote'] XD yes i realize Suzumiya Haruhi is OPed ...of course as all haruhi fans know she is in essence a god. so...i did try my best to tone her down >.> didnt really want a "Divine-Beast" Haruhi roaming about.Not really trying to bash your work, but just to let you know, the cards you made are suggestions to be made in the actual card game, which of course has limits (just compare the Egyptian God Cards to the more useful cards -.-). Anyways, yeah, Haruhi rules, and she is indeed a god lol. I think I should change my rating to a 8/10 now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 8/29 added adventures of mikuru asahina Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ogico Irou Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 ENDLESS 8?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DroutTrigger Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 not bad, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonwendy Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Pretty Good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultimatesuzumiya Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 The pictures are pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GraveHorizon Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 The pictures are decent. The original images were nice but now they're squished.OCG 7/10Images 8/10Effects 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 bump. update: added objection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted September 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 BUMPAGE added You wont get Away! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurevin Posted September 6, 2009 Report Share Posted September 6, 2009 theese are really good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UltimateOTK7 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Cool cards. Some are very creative too. Btw. What's this supposed to mean? "Metagame spoils the fun in playing, especially when the player is a prick too. Having a meta deck doesnt make you a great duelist, it just makes you a coward. Copy into your sig if you are amoung the few tournament players who use something other than Lightsworn, Glads, or Blackwings. -originally written by Kailyn625, 11:41 pm 8/25/09" I saw it in you sig and i kinda dnt get it. I run a Morphtronic Deck cuz i think the playing style is very flexible. I also have a Blackwing Deck, but i pretty much dnt use it unless my friends want to see what they can do. I also have a Gladiator Beast Deck but it just sits there cuz i like NEVER use it (Dont really like Gladiator Beasts. XP). Do you have something against BW's, Lightsworns', and Glads? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted September 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2009 BUMPAGE, added bamboo loeaf rhapsody, God knows..., The True Ruler, Bouken Desho? Desho?, Hare Hare Yukai, Super Driver, Gathering of the SOS brigade and "Yuki, Muon, Madobe Nite" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted September 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 Awesome cards! Suzumiya does seem to be OP but she can manipulate reality to her will. In retrospect, this would be a demotion. 10/10! =) btw, anyone else find the endless eight episodes a little annoying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 Wow. Most of the monsters are OP'd. Especially Haruhi. Then again, she can manipulate reality. God cards have nothin on her. Although her stats shouldn't be very high, since she's not really a fighter. She's too easy to summon. Most pics are great. Effects are ceative. Minor OCG errors in some cards, but this is a Haruhi Set, so 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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