Touketsu, The Wolf Daemon

[Skyfi]

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Image Credit: Father Wolf, Edited by Me.

 

When this card is successfully used in a Synchro Summon, Special Summon this card in ATK mode. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of level 5 or higher monsters on the field x400. If this card is Special Summoned from the graveyard, except by its own effect this card's level is treated as the amount of cards in your Spell or Trap zone. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove it from play.[/align]

[Bengal]

First sentence:

 

"When this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, Special Summon it in Attack Position during the End Phase."

 

I like it, Father Wolf's image is great, and the gold rare is pretty good.

 

I don't really think the second sentence is necessary and "This card's ATK is" = "This card gains ATK". The effect seems balanced, and it could be a very useful effect.

 

8.5/10

[Skyfi]

Thanks, I'll fix the first sentence later.

[Wanderley]

the glod border around the image is bit on the right^^

fix it :)

[Skyfi]

This isn't the showcase section. Go away.

[Wanderley]

but i only whant to help also being partient

 

OCG fix:

When this card is successfully used for a Synchro Summon, Special Summon this card in Attack Position. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of level 5 or higher monsters on the field x400. If this card is Special Summoned from the graveyard, except by its own effect this card's level is treated as the amount of cards in your Spell or Trap zone. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove it from play.

 

hope it helped

 

mode is the old OCG

[Skyfi]

Thanks, I'll fix it later but Im pretty sure I have to keep in Successfully.

[ragnarok1945]

not the first time I've seen the pic, effect looks balanced out, and the OCG errors have already been pointed out, so this gets 9/10

[Spire]

Wanderley has pointed out some errors. I also think, "this card's level is treated as the amount of cards" = "this card's level is equal to the amount of cards". Not too sure, but that's how I would have worded it. But OCG dosen't really matter much anyway. First thing that I was concered about is, why it has a WATER attribute? Beast-Warrior's tend to have EARTH and it dosen't really seem to go with the effect/ name, but again, just my opinion. Now another thing is the second sentence. Since the ATK of the card is equal to the number of Level 5 or higher monsters on the field x400, why bother giving it 1000 ATK points? If their is only 1 LV5 monster out, then it's ATK is 400. Or did you mean it gains ATK points? Don't know what else to add. The effect seems balanced and shows some originality. Overall a nice card, keep it up.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

I like the gold border. reminds me of a gold series card.

1st effect may need a slight drawback. otherwise its a beefed up version of plaguespreader.

2nd effect works, but its ATK is equal to the amount of 5 star cards on your side of the field, wouldnt it need a ? for ATK or a 0. otherwise it would be gain..

other than that. i like it.

8/10

[Skyfi]

Wanderley has pointed out some errors. I also think' date=' "this card's level is treated as the amount of cards" = "this card's level is [i']equal to[/i] the amount of cards". Not too sure, but that's how I would have worded it. But OCG dosen't really matter much anyway. First thing that I was concered about is, why it has a WATER attribute? Beast-Warrior's tend to have EARTH and it dosen't really seem to go with the effect/ name, but again, just my opinion. Now another thing is the second sentence. Since the ATK of the card is equal to the number of Level 5 or higher monsters on the field x400, why bother giving it 1000 ATK points? If their is only 1 LV5 monster out, then it's ATK is 400. Or did you mean it gains ATK points? Don't know what else to add. The effect seems balanced and shows some originality. Overall a nice card, keep it up.

 

Thanks Spire, your tight I should have had the ATK as ?