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Onix Pixel-over


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More shading and blending on the outline etc.

 

Cracks look a bit too simple.

 

Needs more depth in the mouth.

 

Also a few more colours added in would be good ^-^

 

Yeah, I know, I got the colours off the sprite; seemed easier. I see what you mean about the mouth, but I didn't really have any problems with it as it is, so yeah. XD

 

I'll do Omanyte, sure. =o

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quite good.

 

I'll just wait for Zeroshot to get here and shoot me down like there's no tomorrow. ;D

 

Well, if your gonna be like that...

 

Shading doesn't match the pic, not to mention that it is rather basic and/or incorrect

Onix is a funking rock-worm-dragon-dinosaur thing, your surface is to smooth.

The border on the head should overlap the horn, otherwise the horn would be placed on the left side of Onix's head.

I forgot to say that Onix is also a snake.

You did a decent job on outlining, it's a shame that the shading doesn't bring out the shape at all.

Besides the texture being to smooth, the shape (mainly the head) is to roundy.

Your shading technique would be good if this was a sprite, however this is fully blown Pixel Art, it has to be more....non-blanish? It's late and I can't think of a better word -_-'

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quite good.

 

I'll just wait for Zeroshot to get here and shoot me down like there's no tomorrow. ;D

 

Well' date=' if your gonna be like that...

 

Shading doesn't match the pic, not to mention that it is rather basic and/or incorrect

Onix is a f***ing rock-worm-dragon-dinosaur thing, your surface is to smooth.

The border on the head should overlap the horn, otherwise the horn would be placed on the left side of Onix's head.

I forgot to say that Onix is also a snake.

You did a decent job on outlining, it's a shame that the shading doesn't bring out the shape at all.

Besides the texture being to smooth, the shape (mainly the head) is to roundy.

Your shading technique would be good if this was a sprite, however this is fully blown Pixel Art, it has to be more....non-blanish? It's late and I can't think of a better word -_-'

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But you do shoot people down like there's no tomorrow. =P

 

Anyway, yeah, you're right. Shading is a problem I always get. >-<

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