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Chaotic underworld turned yugioh


ChaoticKid

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I'm not tough on Fake Types or Vanillas, (Normal Monsters) but other people are, so watch out. There are a lot of OCG (Official Card Grammer) mistakes, and there are too many for me to correct. Most cards are OPed. (Overpowered) Tone the effects down a little, or add some drawbacks. The pictures are cool, though. You're new here, so I'll give you a 7/10. Somewhat of a good start for a newbie. 8)

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1. Your Pics are very nice!

2. Your OCG isnt really flawless.

Its always "ATK" "DEF" ..or for example : "Fiend-Type" - "Underworld-Type" (by the way..The german translation of Fiend-Type is the same as "Underworld-Type"..sooo let them be Fiend-Types..it doesnt make any sense to create a fake-type if a Type that exists is nearly..(or completely) the same...)

its also "Normal Summon" (Flip, Special, Fusion, Ritual Summon...always the same ;) )

3. The most effects are very unimpressive..they fit in a set..but the whole set isnt to original..Sorry

Good luck next time

6/10

Since you're a newb

8/10 (Great Job for a 1 Star..Mister!)

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