herbie Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 [align=center]Big Barrel Beetle[spoiler=Insect/Synchro/Effect]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThere can only be 1 face-up "Big Barrel Beetle" on the field. Your opponent cannot target any other monster card on the field with the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster card other than this card. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the removed monster's level x200. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Pretty good, Mabey a bit OPed so ill give it a 8.5/10. The pic is kinda burry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Pretty good' date=' Mabey a bit OPed so ill give it a 8.5/10. The pic is kinda burry...[/quote'] Where did you get the holo sheet. (it can be better) Pic can be better too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 A little overpowered dont cha think? Well for the OP'dness I'll give a 7/10.Good Pic, Nice Name Holo, good OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 do you reckon it would be better if i got rid of the "Your opponent cannot select another monster you control as an attack target, nor as the target of a Spell, Trap or Monster card effect." partand changed it with something a little less powerful? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 you can get rid of the Spell, trap and monster effect part, the Attack Target can stay though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blaze. Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Some Ideas: On the part were you cant select another monster as attack target, bla, bla, bla, change it to "When this card is synchro summoned, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target until the end phase of your next turn. If your opponent selects another monster as an attack/spell/trap/effect monster target, you can pay 1000 life points to negate the attack/spell/trap/effect monster's effect." Then, instead of removing from play to give your opponent damage equal to attack, it should say this: "You can tribute one monster on your side of the field (except "Big Barrel Beetle") to inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to half of it's attack or defense. If this effect is activated, this card cannot attack until your next battle phase" That way, it will make it less OP and more realistic. Right now, because its OP'd, the picture should be cropped a bit better and the picture isnt a very good one, I give it a 68/100. If you fix it, I may give you a better score, keep trying :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 you can get rid of the Spell' date=' trap and monster effect part, the Attack Target can stay though [/quote']yeah that's what i originally had it as when i first made it the pic i made my self except the beetle itself (i added a holo sheet, 3 layers of the same background with different effects at different areas, the tech circle and the shadow myself)and i think it's pretty blurry cuz i made it into a jpeg and reduced it, lowering the quality a fair bitalso the holo on the writing was just a first attempt, i have decent holo sheets but it's just my serious lack of skill that makes it look pretty bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 It's a powerful card with a powerful effect. The image isn't the best, but I actually like this card quite a bit. Keep up the nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Insect Synchro! Awesome. Great name. The pic could be a little sharper, maybe a different background might help, but I love it, it's perfect. BlazeVGR made some good points. Those are all excellent ways to improve the card's effect. All in all, I'd say, with those effect changes, this card is very good. Now we just need some insect tuners. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 i changed the effect slightlyhopefully it's a bit more balanced nowalso with the picture i do realise it looks a bit weird but the picture is fairly wide compared to height so it makes it hard to fit it all in and make it look normal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KdogPrime Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Actually, I'm a little dissappointed that you went with a more simplified effect. I wanted to see some Spell/Trap blockage. But whatever, it's still a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 hmm maybe it would be better if it was the only card allowed to be targeted by effects instead of attacks? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 I like this synchro but i think you should focus it's effect more around insects. The way it is now it is Op'ed but with focus on a specific type it could be a bit more balanced.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 pic is slightly blurry, but it's balanced enough for an insect 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 INTERESTING...Love the effect, the image, and the OCG is okay, you know what, you deserve a 9/10 ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 monster card=Monster Card Kind of OP, but nice effect overall. The pic is quite good but looks blurry. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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