Alordzynix Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 [align=center]Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. During your Main Phase, you can select 1 monster you control that was Normal Summoned this turn and pay 1000 life points to Special Summon this card from your hand. As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot declare an attack against the selected monster. This card is also treated as a Beast-Warrior-Type monster. Pay 800 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, destroy this card. Image Credit: I used guardian beast-3 from cuson[/align] Notes:- According to my Translating program Pescare is Fish in Italian- The Beast-Warrior part is something I added so that in a deck (for an RP/Contest) I could combine this with an other set I'm working on.- I know that you could use this for an easy Synchro Summon but that is not what it is meant for so please don't mention it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Nice effect, I like drawback effects, it makes the flow of the game seem more fair, nice image and Cuson is an awesome artist, his works on DA are awesome! 9/10 Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 I would move the last line up next to where you first talk about selecting a monster. Its less confusing. Nice alliteration in the title, although I'm not sure how much I like "Payed Protection" Solid card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 excellent pic and OCG. Effect is well balanced to suit it 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I would move the last line up next to where you first talk about selecting a monster. Its less confusing.Changed thatNice alliteration in the title' date=' although I'm not sure how much I like "Payed Protection"[/quote']I thought Paid Protection suited the theme and if I would have done something different among the lines of "Bodyguard" or something it would have left me with less options if I wanted to add other cards to it. But other suggestions are welcome. Thanks for the comments everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 The pic is good,the Effect is good, and the OCG is good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 The pic is cool and the effect is excellent..9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I like how the effect fits the name.A 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Thanks for the comments everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Seems pretty good and has a pretty unique effect overall. The only thing about the card that I don't understand is the picture, everything else is fine. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Near the end of the first sentence, you didnt capitilise life points, that was the only OCG error i saw. Effect is well balanced and the pic is pretty good and in a way, goes with the effect because there are 2 things in the pic which is selected monster and this card. 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Near the end of the first sentence' date=' you didnt capitilise life points, that was the only OCG error i saw. Effect is well balanced and the pic is pretty good and in a way, goes with the effect because there are 2 things in the pic which is selected monster and this card. 9.4/10[/quote'] Why is there always a person to find that one last OCG error that everyone else didn't see at a time that I'm to lazy to change it >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Excelent OCG and the pic is perfect *-*My rate is 9.6/10 (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 excellent pic and OCG. Effect is well balanced to suit it 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Haha, Mafia fish :). Anyway good card, the image is nice, the OCG is solid, and the effect is interesting. Only one other OCG I saw, just some re-wording, it's not a big deal: "declare an attack against the selected monster" = "select that monster as an attack target." 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 nice card:DThe effect is nice, no OCG errors, pic is good...it's balanced...:Drate: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I like it. One of the great cards with unique effects.9.5/10. (^_^) I've added a new card BTW. Check it out. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-152133.html :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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